Chlark Fanfic: Crisis, Chapter 24

Sep 14, 2011 01:45

Yet another Crisis chapter!  In which the Magnificent Bastard strikes again... :-/

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iluvaqt September 14 2011, 00:50:08 UTC
I liked the spin you put on Lionel's relentless pursuit for answers. He really is the master of play. How devastating the situation is and I can understand why Chloe's so desperate to make penance, even at the expense of her education :( I hope Lex comes through for Clark soon.

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babydee1 September 14 2011, 00:58:45 UTC
Something has to happen soon, because I think Chloe's almost had about as much as she can take.

Thanks for commenting, Kim. Hope you are well! :-)

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jacques21 September 14 2011, 02:38:57 UTC
Awesome update.

Wow poor Chloe... I love that she continued to turn down that rat bastard offers. Even though part of her has to hate Clark she's still willing to protect him.

When that bastard Lionel goes after someone he does it relentlessly.

If/When Clark finds out what Daddy Luthor is doing/did he's going to flip and if he finds out the reason why... it makes me think he'll do something stupid like tell Chloe to give him up.

Can't wait for more.

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babydee1 September 15 2011, 09:13:52 UTC
“Awesome update.”

Thank ya! :-P

“Wow poor Chloe... I love that she continued to turn down that rat bastard offers. Even though part of her has to hate Clark she's still willing to protect him.”

I know. It’s all very complex, isn’t it? They’re both protecting and saving each other despite what they’ve done/are doing to hurt each other. At the end of the day, the strong base of their friendship is still there. It’s hanging on by a very slim thread; but it’s still there. :-)

“When that bastard Lionel goes after someone he does it relentlessly.”

He ain’t called The Magnificent Bastard for nuthin’! ;-)

“If/When Clark finds out what Daddy Luthor is doing/did he's going to flip and if he finds out the reason why... it makes me think he'll do something stupid like tell Chloe to give him up.”

We’ll see. :-)

“Can't wait for more.”

Glad you like it, and thanks as always for reviewing! :-D

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madlenita September 14 2011, 07:04:10 UTC
Oh, chapter from Chloe poit of view, thanks for this, i had to watch again lis of episodes from season 3 i had to know when Clark will got super hearing and he find out about Chloe's deal...

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babydee1 September 14 2011, 07:27:31 UTC
Thanks for commenting, Maddie! :)

I'm not following Season 3 to the letter; some elements have been moved along the timeline differently, and I'll jettison some parts of it altogether. So if I decide to write in Clark's superhearing, it may not necessarily be how he discovers about the deal with Lionel - if indeed he discovers it at all. ;)

Hope this makes sense!

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madlenita September 15 2011, 07:33:57 UTC
"if indeed he discovers it at all"-well if he will find out he will find out that Chloe protected him even after she was mad/furious at him... So for my everything you decite is ok, you are amazing writer...

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babydee1 September 15 2011, 09:04:20 UTC
"well if he will find out he will find out that Chloe protected him even after she was mad/furious at him..."

EXACTLY. You're very perceptive! ;-)

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easilyenraged September 14 2011, 09:37:38 UTC
Another excellent chapter, Chloe's reaction just what you would expect from her.

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babydee1 September 15 2011, 10:20:05 UTC
Thanks, EE! Glad you like. :-)

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kitmerlot1213 September 14 2011, 12:26:32 UTC
Man, when it rains, it pours!

I had forgotten just how insanely obsessed Lionel Luthor was with Clark. And yes Chloe made a bad choice by agreeing to work with the psycho, but I don't think she realized just how single-minded Lionel Luthor actually was.

I just hope Lex steps in to help soon because I don't think I can take much more Chloe-torture. I mean that in the best possible way Dee :):)

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babydee1 September 15 2011, 15:40:00 UTC
“Man, when it rains, it pours!”

Does it ever!!!

“I had forgotten just how insanely obsessed Lionel Luthor was with Clark. And yes Chloe made a bad choice by agreeing to work with the psycho, but I don't think she realized just how single-minded Lionel Luthor actually was.”

I’m only just beginning to realise *just* how intensely obsessed and single-minded he was. There I was, thinking that maybe I’d gone too far having Lionel not only fire Chloe’s Dad but also yank the Torch computers when I remembered that he actually did do both things on the show for the very same reason - that Chloe wouldn’t give him the Intel on Clark that he so desperately wanted. Creepy and scary!!! :-O

“I just hope Lex steps in to help soon because I don't think I can take much more Chloe-torture. I mean that in the best possible way Dee :):)”

Don’t worry, Kit - I know how you feel, and Lex help is on the way ( ... )

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