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Chlark Fanfic: Crisis, Chapter 30

May 09, 2012 22:45

How long has it been since I worked on this one...three months? Eep. :-/ Good thing it's a nice, long chapter then, in which there's a good deal of much-needed introspection from our two protagonists. And, as promised, the worst is most definitely over.

But enough of my waffling. Here's the next chapter of Crisis, hopefully the first of at ( Read more... )

chloe, crisis, clark, redkclark, smallville, kaloe, rated:pg13, fanfic, chlark, kal

Comments 22

iluvaqt May 10 2012, 00:55:48 UTC

Heart was beating about a mile a minute even though I knew he was making the right decision, I was worried for him. Worried for what would happen in prison, if he'd be confronted and his secret would come out, what that would mean, who's attention it would get.

I'm glad Chloe realized what he was trying to do for her in the desert and went to protect him in the end. It doesn't mean he's forgiven or that everything's forgotten. They've got a long road ahead. But at least she knows he really cares for her, and in turn, she's realized that she still cares about him too.

kitmerlot1213 May 10 2012, 00:56:49 UTC

an excellent chapter!

Clark and Chloe are finally on the road to healing and Clark's being so damn mature that I'm quite proud of him.

Continued lovely work on this fic :)

jacques21 May 10 2012, 06:00:26 UTC

Perfect update.

I actually had to stop reading and change tabs when I got to the part where Clark told Chloe he was turning himself in...

I didn't think that Clark putting on the red-k ring and taking Chloe to the desert helped any but it looks like it did... Chloe finally realized that she was teetering on a dangerous path and now she completely knows she's no longer afraid of Clark or Kal.

I am proud that Clark is willing to turn himself in. I wonder what his reaction will be to finding Chloe waiting for him at the police station.

Oh ho Papa Kent was pissed.

Can't wait for more.

madlenita May 10 2012, 06:25:00 UTC

Yes, thanks for this chapter, finally Chloe is felling better!!!! And the whole scene Clark/his parents... just amazing... Thanks again and i can;t wait for next chapter. . .

babydee1 May 10 2012, 07:05:01 UTC

"Yes, thanks for this chapter, finally Chloe is felling better!!!"

Well, she's far from 'better', but at least she's turned a corner. :-)

"And the whole scene Clark/his parents... just amazing... Thanks again and i can;t wait for next chapter. . ."

Glad you like, Maddie, and sorry for the wait! :-)

eternal_moonie May 10 2012, 08:23:28 UTC

Chapter 30... CHAPTER 30?!

Another thing that shows how more talented you are than me.

Well done Evil Cliffy Queen!!!!!