Chlark Fanfic: Crisis, Chapter 3

[babydee1]

Comments

[iluvaqt]

Wow I don't know what to make of the fact that Jonathan knows what happened to Chloe. I understood his anger but I love that he was immediately subdued and troubled when he read her expression and what she didn't say. Jor-El's plans going awry and his helping Jonathan made more sense too. Because Clark was in danger of becoming everything he didn't want his son to be. Looking forward to the withdrawal and how much Clark admits to remembering...

[babydee1]

Aiee!!! How did I forget to apprciate this comment?? I'm so sorry, babes. My bad! :-)

"Wow I don't know what to make of the fact that Jonathan knows what happened to Chloe. I understood his anger but I love that he was immediately subdued and troubled when he read her expression and what she didn't say."

It must have been horrifying for Jonathan to realise just how far Clark had fallen. :-(

"Jor-El's plans going awry and his helping Jonathan made more sense too. Because Clark was in danger of becoming everything he didn't want his son to be."

Exactly. Even from Jor-El's point of view, Clark had crossed the line; and that's saying a lot.

"Looking forward to the withdrawal and how much Clark admits to remembering..."

Oh, he's definitely not gonna like himself at all after this. :-/

Thanks for commenting, and I'm so sorry I forgot you! :-)

[eternal_moonie]

What an amazing chapter! Poor Chloe. I'd cuddle Chloe if I could...

[babydee1]

I know, babes. *hugs*

[kitmerlot1213]

Good for Jonathan for figuring out what Chloe wasn't saying about Clark. You are doing an excellent job eith this story and the very difficult subject matter.

[babydee1]

Thanks, Kathy - appreciate the comment. :-)

[phantom_queen]

Was kind of pissed at papa Kent for his comments to Chloe but forgave him in the end.

Can't wait for the angsty chlark reunion. Not sure where they can go from here. As much as I loved the Luke and Laura romance on GH as a kid not sure I could buy it as an adult

[babydee1]

"Was kind of pissed at papa Kent for his comments to Chloe but forgave him in the end."

Well, you know how sanctimonious Bo could be. I decided to stay true to the character! :-D

"Can't wait for the angsty chlark reunion. Not sure where they can go from here. As much as I loved the Luke and Laura romance on GH as a kid not sure I could buy it as an adult"

Never really watched General Hospital (?), but Chlark have a long, long way to go before they can even look each other in the eye again.

Glad you like it so far. :-)

[christina_kat]

That was really great. I liked the Jonathan/Chloe conversation and how J realized what his son did to Chloe. I really can't wait to read Clark's POV. please???

[babydee1]

You'll get it in the next chapter, I promise!