"Always Darkest Before Dawn, Part III"

[bad_ol_don]

          The Personalized People warehouse was just as dark and seemingly abandoned as Don had thought it would be. Even the damaged, rusted black vehicle parked in the unused parking lot looked like it had been forgotten some time ago. “I just can’t believe he’s alive,” the figure in the suit remarked to himself as he crept toward the building

Comments

Hmm...

[anonymous]

"The Personalized People warehouse was just as dark and seemingly abandoned as Don had thought it would be."

as:

"The Personalized People warehouse seemed just as dark and abandoned as Don had thought it would be."

“All right, then, bird brain,” the figure who looked like CJ yelled out,

as:

“All right, then, bird brain,” a figure who looked like CJ yelled out,

I'll probably reread after I've slept some. See you soon love.

Janelle

[fallenangelasb]

Great now I’m addicted Don, Look what you have done. Now I need more because you happen to be writing a superb storyline.

Addicted Don!

Addiction

[ladychari]

This is very good work Don, you've gotten me addicted also. Just make sure you keep my lil boys out of trouble there in Charleston!