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May 26, 2009 07:16

Oh gracious, I turn a blind eye for just a sexond and the second post fills up! Darlings, sweetpeas, do please forgive my tardiness. I bring you now our third installment of the fantasticousity, and would indeed love to, ah, beg your pardon in being so late about it.

SHIN MEGAMI TENSEI: PERSONA 4 KINK MEME
PART THREE

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anonymous August 18 2009, 06:34:53 UTC
I've had this idea floating around in my mind for some time now an I would love to see a lovely Anon fill this ( ... )

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Seconded. anonymous August 18 2009, 13:58:00 UTC
Wow, this prompt sounds interesting. I'd fill it myself but I'm trying to fill another one, so sorry >:

Hopefully someone fills this!

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anonymous August 19 2009, 03:48:28 UTC
Oh...this is amazing prompt. Going to give it a try, OP ♥

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anonymous August 19 2009, 03:53:56 UTC
OP - if I keep them as detective and idol, is that okay? (No TV world, no personas; a murder case is going on in Inaba but it's non-supernatural and only serves to bring Naoto into the story)

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anonymous August 19 2009, 23:20:56 UTC
OP - I am working on the prompt, keeping Naoto and Rise as detective and idol. If this isn't acceptable, please respond here :)

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request op anonymous August 20 2009, 02:08:25 UTC
Don't worry anon, that's perfect! And thank you so much for picking this up *A* ♥

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Fools Paradise [1a/1c] anonymous August 23 2009, 19:12:50 UTC
This takes a while to start! Sorry anons and OP, it will get there...

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The school uniform doesn't fit.

Her wardrobe guys always handled this, had most of her outfits custom-made. The only reason Rise even knows her measurements is because they were listed in her public profile, and even then the company always fudged them. Like that small increase even made a difference, except to the sort of the guys that jerk off to her calendars and photobooks.

The skirt's the big problem. Way too short; the sort of thing Risette would wear. Or would've worn. School starts in a week, at least for Rise, so she'll either have to deal or return it to the store. Bought it in the city, too.

Rise carefully folds the skirt up and places it on her dresser, then flops on her bed, the television babbling in the background, and closes her eyes.

And on Niteline tonight, we'll be examining the events gripping Inaba over--There's no point in going back to school now anyway. Summer vacation is in a month. All she'll get before then will be exams on ( ... )

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Fools Paradise [1b/1c] anonymous August 23 2009, 19:17:11 UTC
The rest of the week doesn't pass as quietly as Rise would like. Grandma said helping out in the store would help her, show her what it was like to be normal again. Everyone else in town must have missed the memo, because people show up outside the store every day, peering inside and looking for a glimpse of Risette. At least the ones who walk in usually buy something, just to be polite. "Business has never been better," Rise's grandmother tries to joke, except it doesn't seem like she thinks it's funny ( ... )

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Fools Paradise [1c/1c] anonymous August 23 2009, 19:22:03 UTC
Rise sighs, then turns around again. "I'm sorry, but we're closing soon, so if you could--"

The customer's staring out the window. A young man, maybe her age, in a blue dress shirt and yellow tie. Wearing a hat, though Rise can see short dark hair poking out and framing his ears, standing out against pale skin.

He's cute.

"Um... hi," Rise manages, trying to sound casual but clutching the rag tight in her hands.

The boy turns his head, nods, then looks back to the window.

He can't be any taller than her and he's definitely slimmer, which makes this even weirder. Rise always liked tall guys, maybe with a bit of muscle - like the dancers in her concerts and the boys she worked with on television shows. Not that many of them were interested in her. Wrong gender. This guy might be the same way; he's pretty enough, prettier than most girls Rise's met. He could be a male idol, she thinks, then smiles to herself ( ... )

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Fools Paradise [2a/2c] anonymous August 23 2009, 19:24:53 UTC
The weather's too hot, but that just means nobody's on the school roof. Which is fine with Rise right now, since it means she can hide up here until she figures out how to stop crying ( ... )

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Fools Paradise [2b/2c] anonymous August 23 2009, 19:27:04 UTC
When she was working, free time was an abstract concept to Rise - and something she always figured would be boring, since nobody would be watching or listening. She was halfway right; since she got back, her evenings are pretty much empty. But that's fine. It's how things were when she was younger. Even when she was with other kids, she might as well have been a ghost.

Rise sits on the edge of the bed, considers doing her homework - then quickly turns on the television instead. Niteline, again. Still talking about the murders. Maybe trigonometry isn't such a bad idea.

She's about to hit the power button again, when she notices who's sitting next the presenter on-screen.

"--involving public officials. Tonight we have here Naoto Shirogane, the Detective Prince whose looks are wowing the--"The boy who came to the shop, the one with the hat and the seriously bad attitude. The one who Rise's been looking out for but never sees in town. Who didn't even tell her his name, though at least she knows it now. Naoto Shirogane, ace detective ( ... )

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Fools Paradise [2c/2c] anonymous August 23 2009, 19:29:51 UTC
Psyching herself to walk through the school gates the next day takes longer than Rise would like. It doesn't help that the day passes much the same as yesterday, except for the whole crying on the roof jag. Naoto wouldn't do that; he'd probably think Rise was stupid if he knew she had ( ... )

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not op, but lovin' it :D anonymous August 23 2009, 20:38:51 UTC
Wow, this is great *A* looking forward to more, anon!

"He's still cute. Jerk." favorite line fffff <3

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OP anonymous August 24 2009, 08:43:17 UTC
O-oh my god anon. ilu. ilu so hard.

Firstly, I love the pace! I'm glad it isn't any faster because I love the idea of seeing how their relationship will form and everything :> and sjslfjkdks I loved the short interaction between Rise and Naoto ♥ It was perfect! I love how Rise thinks Naoto's a jerk XD

Risette is old news to Inaba - probably because Risette is now a girl in an apron who spends most of her day hiding in the back of a tofu shop. Glamorous.
For some reason, I really liked this. (: I think you have Rise's voice just right, and I really enjoy a lot of little sentences like this.

I don't even djdlskdh I have no more words for the awesomeness here. I am SO happy you're filling this, anon! I can't wait for more~♥♥

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Re: Fools Paradise [2c/2c] anonymous August 24 2009, 10:56:49 UTC
Add another thing I envy about your writing, Mr. Writer!Anon; your amazing skill to write Naoto/Rise. Because honestly, I'm amazed at how many different ways you do this! Honestly, if I had written as many as you had, the plot usually start looking similar, but no~sir~y for you!

So yea, total awe, amazement and I wish there is more!

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Re: Fools Paradise [2c/2c] anonymous August 24 2009, 13:03:57 UTC
This is really good. I'm looking forward to more.

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