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while caught up in a fit of masochism today I saw that the magnificent epic by my favorite DN author had just ended. I shared parts of the first fic or two in the series with the comm before, so I thought, hell, why not.
not one of my smarter ideas.
In a hospital, L paces back and forth in the waiting room. He wants to be with Raito but the younger man kicked him out of the room. Sachiko and Sayu are sitting in the chairs while Watari leans against the wall. How long does it take to give a c-section?
I see that while my self-esteem was too high to read this series it took a right hand off the cliff of what the fuck into assbaby chasm.
blah blah skip chunks of wildly skippign POV and L continuing to pace like a cliche from a bad movie
Both Matt gives him a soft look while Near looks at him confused. Near wants L to retire but he doesn’t. Even though L saved Kira, he doesn’t feel L should end his life career for it. He still respects the older man. Walking over to L, he sighs, “I’m sure he will be fine.”
The pov and grammar in this confuse the everliving shit out of me. Apparently two Matts are looking at someone (Watari? L? Who knows) softly and Near is confused because he can't decide whether or not he wants L to retire. Or does Matt not want him to? It's fucking impossible to tell because the POV shifts around at the speed of light.
Walking over to L, he sighs, “I’m sure he will be fine.”
Looking up from the floor, L stares at one of his heirs. What could he say? How can he make everything right again? There isn’t a doubt of what he did was against his oath as a detective, but he couldn’t throw away the only one he loved. Near and Matt walk over to them.
Okay, either Matt and/or Near are dancing around the room or it was Mello, who was not mentioned whatsoever, who was making big ol' moony eyes at L and trying to comfort him.
“Who fucking asked you what you think?” Mello snaps. “For god sakes, he is stressed about his lover having his child.”
Welp.
“Your lover is a known killer.” Near responds emotionless.
I think this is the only fanfic that has ever made me like Near, which is terrifying, as I think I'm supposed to hate him for denying the assbaby-spawning love of our heroes
Standing up, Sayu hisses, “So he made a mistake. You have no right to say anything, you, brat.” Near blinks at her and she turns to L. With a kind smile, she mumbles, “He will be all right.”
Things Yagami Sayu would never say for $100 please, Alex
Without saying a word, L walks down the hall. He is now a father. He has a son now. Everything is perfect.
I'm throwing up. I'm stating the obvious. Yay.
“Kai Yagami.” L answers without thinking twice. He can never give his last name to his child in fear it will come back to haunt him. His career makes him being careful.
Kai. I guess at least it's not Nevaeh. But if only him career had made him being careful enough to making him not knocking Light up with magical assbabies in the first place...
As he grabs L’s hand, Raito squeezes softly and mumbles tiredly, “That is a beautiful name.” He knows why L refuses to give their son his last name and he doesn’t blame him at all. He realizes his father would be proud if he was still around. Closing his eyes, he whispers, “I love you, L Lawliet.”
Did I say I was throwing up before? I lied. But I really am, now. Holy moly.
“And I love Raito.” L responds while leaning over to his lover, kissing him gently. Their future is right in front of their eyes. Nothing could pull them apart. They have been through everything together and they will stay together. In the start, it was an addiction between them that became love. Now, they have proof of their love. Time will tell if the three young boys will forgive him for what he has done to protect his lover. But he is willing to forget it. As he stares at the bundle of joy in the crib, he whispers, “Kai is our proof of our love.”
hey that's a lot of text but boys and girls, this is why I don't like this species of mpreg. You don't need a baby to prove you love someone. People can be in love and stay together forever without ever having children and it doesn't make it any less of a relationship than people who have 20 kids. Making Light into a... horribly misogynistic parody of an overemotional woman in order to knock him up so that you can go ~my otp has babies so duh they'll obviously be together forever and their love is truer now~ is indescribably uncool.
Yes, everything is good now.
the damn thing is over, so I think I might be inclined to agree.
not one of my smarter ideas.
In a hospital, L paces back and forth in the waiting room. He wants to be with Raito but the younger man kicked him out of the room. Sachiko and Sayu are sitting in the chairs while Watari leans against the wall. How long does it take to give a c-section?
I see that while my self-esteem was too high to read this series it took a right hand off the cliff of what the fuck into assbaby chasm.
blah blah skip chunks of wildly skippign POV and L continuing to pace like a cliche from a bad movie
Both Matt gives him a soft look while Near looks at him confused. Near wants L to retire but he doesn’t. Even though L saved Kira, he doesn’t feel L should end his life career for it. He still respects the older man. Walking over to L, he sighs, “I’m sure he will be fine.”
The pov and grammar in this confuse the everliving shit out of me. Apparently two Matts are looking at someone (Watari? L? Who knows) softly and Near is confused because he can't decide whether or not he wants L to retire. Or does Matt not want him to? It's fucking impossible to tell because the POV shifts around at the speed of light.
Walking over to L, he sighs, “I’m sure he will be fine.”
Looking up from the floor, L stares at one of his heirs. What could he say? How can he make everything right again? There isn’t a doubt of what he did was against his oath as a detective, but he couldn’t throw away the only one he loved. Near and Matt walk over to them.
Okay, either Matt and/or Near are dancing around the room or it was Mello, who was not mentioned whatsoever, who was making big ol' moony eyes at L and trying to comfort him.
“Who fucking asked you what you think?” Mello snaps. “For god sakes, he is stressed about his lover having his child.”
Welp.
“Your lover is a known killer.” Near responds emotionless.
I think this is the only fanfic that has ever made me like Near, which is terrifying, as I think I'm supposed to hate him for denying the assbaby-spawning love of our heroes
Standing up, Sayu hisses, “So he made a mistake. You have no right to say anything, you, brat.” Near blinks at her and she turns to L. With a kind smile, she mumbles, “He will be all right.”
Things Yagami Sayu would never say for $100 please, Alex
Without saying a word, L walks down the hall. He is now a father. He has a son now. Everything is perfect.
I'm throwing up. I'm stating the obvious. Yay.
“Kai Yagami.” L answers without thinking twice. He can never give his last name to his child in fear it will come back to haunt him. His career makes him being careful.
Kai. I guess at least it's not Nevaeh. But if only him career had made him being careful enough to making him not knocking Light up with magical assbabies in the first place...
As he grabs L’s hand, Raito squeezes softly and mumbles tiredly, “That is a beautiful name.” He knows why L refuses to give their son his last name and he doesn’t blame him at all. He realizes his father would be proud if he was still around. Closing his eyes, he whispers, “I love you, L Lawliet.”
Did I say I was throwing up before? I lied. But I really am, now. Holy moly.
“And I love Raito.” L responds while leaning over to his lover, kissing him gently. Their future is right in front of their eyes. Nothing could pull them apart. They have been through everything together and they will stay together. In the start, it was an addiction between them that became love. Now, they have proof of their love. Time will tell if the three young boys will forgive him for what he has done to protect his lover. But he is willing to forget it. As he stares at the bundle of joy in the crib, he whispers, “Kai is our proof of our love.”
hey that's a lot of text but boys and girls, this is why I don't like this species of mpreg. You don't need a baby to prove you love someone. People can be in love and stay together forever without ever having children and it doesn't make it any less of a relationship than people who have 20 kids. Making Light into a... horribly misogynistic parody of an overemotional woman in order to knock him up so that you can go ~my otp has babies so duh they'll obviously be together forever and their love is truer now~ is indescribably uncool.
Yes, everything is good now.
the damn thing is over, so I think I might be inclined to agree.