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[retrophilic]

The basic plot of this is that Light saves L by taking a bullet from a sniper. Souichirou starts beating L up at the hospital because it’s all L’s fault that his son’s hurt. L is a wuss and doesn’t fight back. Then some stuff happens, and Light’s better after, like, a day. Then L is in the hospital, and… it’s just really messed up. And then there’s

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[girlontherage]

Oh....I....there are no words....no words for this.

[chappysnow]

I now have the image of Light walking around with Ryuk in a collar and treating him like a dog XD

Dead tired + working on annoying Excel sheet = this makes me laugh.

[sparklydrone]

They totally right-click/merge'd.

Also, of course animals and L. I mean, if L is a raven... but wouldn't that hurt, though? The mental image does, at any rate.

Also also, cute puppies like the one in your icon make everything better :)

(well, except perhaps for Light)

[kirandor]

Light had pulled L INTO him

Well, there exists a fetish about "unbirth" or "reverse birth", where one person actually crawls into the other...

My favourite quote is the last one, though:
"And so the pregnancy of Light Yagami, lover to L Ryuuzaki, fake boyfriend to Amane Misa, friend of many, son of Soichiro Yagami, brother to Sayu Yagami, lover of animals and L, began."

It's not as good as some of the stuff in "The Adventures of Dark Yagami", but it certainly goes into my quotes list.

[chappysnow]

oh god, the OOC D:
it burns!

There's so much wrong with this that I don't know where to begin.
Great sporking.

[dunkler_ort]

I think I started reading this one a few months ago, only to back-button as fast as I could once I realised just how terrible it was.

I hate it when L is referred to as 'the raven' - how on earth does that possibly make sense to anybody? Yet it happens so often in Death Note fic. I do not understand.

[sashocirrione]

Really, what's wrong with calling him "the detective" or something that actually fits whenever you absolutely feel you can't use his name.

(Though I think using his name is always better).

[dunkler_ort]

Exactly. If an epithet must be used, pretty much anything else would make more sense than "the raven". The bird imagery makes it impossible to take seriously in any context.

[mythc_writer]

My chest hurts from the sporking and the comments. WTF was up with all those redundant statements? I got the image of Souichirou as Kyoya from Ouran High School when I read that sentance about him.