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[baloney_pony]

oh shit i'm in new york!
oh shit
oh shit
oh shit what do i do?

chris

ps: i wrote a haiku the other day:

man pooping
empty roll
tough shit

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[spit_bubble]

go iceskating at rockerfeller center!!

oooooor, get high and go to the natural history museum and lie down under the suspended blue whale. there are ocean sounds!

[pats77]

Awesome! Viva Neuvo York.

Hate to break it to you, but that's not a haiku. The syllable structure for haiku is 5/7/5

My mustache tingles
With much anticipation
Sweet cunnilingis.

[reading_rods_lj]

Rod insists that haiku need not be in strict 5/7/5 syllables. It must only maintain the "spirit" of 5/7/5, and be usually about nature.

I don't believe him, of course. But he insists.

[spit_bubble]

"A style of lyric poetry borrowed from the Japanese that typically presents an intense emotion or vivid image of nature, which, traditionally, is designed to lead to a spiritual insight. Haiku is a fixed poetic form, consisting of seventeen syllables organized into three unrhymed lines of five, seven, and five syllables. Today, however, many poets vary the syllabic count in their haiku."

none of them are haiku, regardless of the syllable count. it's the mood that matters [being of nature/the seasons].

[baloney_pony]

poop is nature