One-shot - Reinventing the World (Part Two)

[bananyphophany]

Title: Reinventing the World (Part Two)
Pairing: Masuda/Tegoshi
Rating: PG-13
Words: ~13,000
Summary: When Tegoshi had gone to bed last night, he hadn’t had a son, and by the time Massu had turned up at his door today at noon, he did.

Comments

[freedomtrain]

OH MY GOOOOOD

I'M GRINNING LIKE AN IDIOT RIGHT NOW.

CAIT ;__________;

THIS IS AMAZING.

SO AMAZING
AND ASKLDJKLJKLGD

I love how you put everything together..
it was so natural ;_____; asdfh

Massu ;_______________;

my stomach.
it hurts.
but in a nice way ;-;

[bananyphophany]

MISHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA~~~
Pumpkin. ;___;
Thank you.
THANK YOU.

lolol, I guess I just like babies. :| KNOWLEDGE -> FIC = GOOD?

Massu. ;_____________;
I think I've made your stomach hurt before.
.... tylenol? ;D

[sanjihan]

... I LOVE EVERY WORD OF THIS. Even the typos. XD I kid, I kid. I'll probably come back with a real comment later, but in the meantime, this was almost unbearably sweet and I cooed and aww'd and squealed like a little girl. Massu was so sweet and awkward, and Tegoshi was an ADORABLE father and alskdjaiera. <3

[bananyphophany]

Sometimes you are mean to me. >______> But I suppose this is okay.
*Snuggle* My Massu will always be awkward. I identify with that though. Perhaps I have a bit of Massu in me (and I'd like a little more if you know what I mean :|)

[pppyyyccc]

thanks for sharing!!!
It was REALLY GOOD~
and I love Massu's position~
this is pure love <3

thinking... Tegoshi Sora... is funny~ hehe
EVERYONE loves Massu's smiles n laughter~<3

thanks again~

[bananyphophany]

Aww, thank you for reading! :D I'm glad you enjoyed.
I'm weak to babyfic, so I had to write one of my own. And yeah, Massu's smile = ♥

[ryogrande]

REMEMBER THE FIGHTING MAN PV? REMEMBER THEIR IDIOTIC ARM FLAILING DURING THE CHORUS?

THAT IS WHAT I DID THROUGH THIS ENTIRE FIC.

WRITE TEGOMASU FOREVER.

[bananyphophany]

CONGRATULATIONS, YOUR DANCING SKILLS ARE OFFICIALLY ON PAR WITH NEWS. You are qualified to join as the new member. :|

WRITE TEGOMASU FOREVER.
I WOULD LOVE TO but don't let Tara catch you saying that. >___>

[sanjihan]

Too late... I totally caught it. And I'm totally okay with you writing them forever... just not EXCLUSIVELY. Or else. ... I'd be sad. Now what. XD

[dw9lives]

MY HEART!!! I cannot tell you how much this fic affected me, I loved it a lot! You are amazing! ♥

[bananyphophany]

♥♥♥♥♥
I'm glad you enjoyed! :D
It's funny, I totally just used the word "affected" to describe the effect of someone else's fic on me not 20 minutes before you commented. XD
Thank you♥ That's... a big compliment. XD