Drabble - Unpretty

[bananyphophany]

Title: Unpretty
Characters: Tegoshi & Masuda
Rating: PG-13
A/N: Part of a bigger story I'm working on. Trigger warning for eating disorders (bulimia).
Summary: If only all imperfections were so easy to remove.

Comments

[yukiri44kai]

I was so sure that Tegoshi is pregnant and being bitter about it, but when I read the line where it says he looks 6 months pregnant, I was so confused xD

Massu is so sweet in his own way~

I'm glad your writing again :D I found your journal a couple months ago, read all your fanfictions and loved them all~

[yukiri44kai]

Oh, I almost forgot, Thanks for sharing :D

[bananyphophany]

No problem!
Haha, no, I would have warned for m-preg if that were the case. XD

:) I sometimes go for a long time without producing anything and then get back into it. My urges to write kind of come and go. Sometimes I'm really productive, sometimes I do nothing for almost a year. XD

[ryogrande]

it's probably bad to say that this is beautiful, but i think it is. i've actually wanted to read about this topic for awhile with him, and i can't think of anyone better to write it than you. ;) that's all i'll say here. can't wait to see the finished product. ♥

[bananyphophany]

I don't think it's bad (maybe ironic depending on which bit you're talking about, though XD)

I'm glad you wanted to read about it with Tegoshi, because I think he's actually a good candidate. He has a bit of a perfectionist, affention-seeking, people-pleasing, all-or-nothing thing going on.

[snowaltz]

I'm delighted to see this update, I've missed your writing <3 And I do hope life is treating you well *hugs* Are you still in Japan for JET?

I think my heart will clench when I read the bigger part of this ficlet

[bananyphophany]

I've been going through the biggest uninspired phase for writing every, which sucks, because I never want to give it up as a hobby. XD And yes, I'm still there! Just started my second year this month. Nagano is wonderful. :D

I've wanted to write an eating disorder story for a while now, because I feel like a lot of the ones in fandom are extremely... uninformed and inaccurate (particularly recovery. XD And mostly anorexia-based.
So I'm pleased it seemed accurate to you. c:

Missed you guys. XD

[getgloryday]

Ah I love your way of writing<3
I'm really no good at comments, so I apologize that all I can say about this is that I liked it. It's sad and it's serious and Tego's thoughts and the way he feels are well done I thought.
I missed reading stuff from you, so thank you<3

[bananyphophany]

<3 Thanks, Hika.
It's okay, I appreciate any comment you leave. :) I wouldn't say you aren't good at them either.
I miss writing. :) I just haven't really managed to find inspiration for a while, but I'm a bit more so with this story.

[kataomi]

A new fiction !!!!! Oh yeah !!!! I'm really happy !!! ^^
In a way it's a sad OS. Tegoshi isnt able to see himself properly :(. Luckily he have someone to help him ! Massu saying “You’re beautiful, you know,” that was so cute !!!!

Thanks for writing !!! ^^

[bananyphophany]

I'm working on an exchange fic at the moment too, but that one has a deadline to run to, so hopefully it'll be done in less than 2 weeks. XD

Eating disorders are sad in general really. :/ Although how Tegoshi sees himself in this particular part of the story is actually accurate, since the binge eating characteristic of bulimia does make your stomach jut out something fierce.

In most of the story, though, his perception will be pretty warped. :/

[kataomi]

Oh really ??? Is that a Tegomasu ???? *_* I cant wait to read it !!!

Hopefully Massu will always save him !!!!! Anyway I have faith in Massu's smile power lol. He can save everybody with that smile ! ( Lol ...sorry ...I'm watching Mahou no melody PV and smiling like a fool because of Massu's smile XD )