LJ Idol Week 8: No Comment

[banyangirl1832]

“So what’s your answer

Comments

[i_17bingo]

Wow, this is intense. And speaking as someone who's seen all sides of this, it's very genuine.

[shadowwolf13]

<3

[dee_aar2]

I could feel every emotion that the protagonist felt ... so real .... The build up is really intense and the entire thing so powerful. Well Done

[bleodswean]

You really captured all of the tangled emotions here!

[halfshellvenus]

This just sounds like such an awful position to be in, trapped between quickly losing the love of someone who matters to you or potentially losing it long-term. I really felt for the narrator here, how scared and apprehensive and pained she was, and felt more for knowing that it could all get worse.