Comments | bart0k: a little too late...

bart0k

a little too late...

Feb 15, 2005 23:51

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midnitefaerie February 28 2005, 16:30:24 UTC

you should check your messages. cause i called you.

midnitefaerie March 3 2005, 21:43:22 UTC

my number didn't come up on your phone? 540 area code.

wondernstranger March 5 2005, 09:00:29 UTC

And you told me you're over her...? Am I misinterpreting the poem?

You and I must live pretty close, Brigitte. Or at least, you live close to my parents-- their area code is 540 as well. heh You should tell "bart0k" here to take the job in Spotsy county. ;) Then he'd be closer to both of us. :)

bart0k March 5 2005, 15:47:16 UTC

Yea this is a poem that I wrote and decided to turn it into a song. This actually isn't about "her", I just posted it to get some advice on the structure and what-not, but everyone sucks, and no one helps. =P

wondernstranger March 6 2005, 13:28:37 UTC

It's not my fault you didn't make it clear that it's a poem-turned-song,and that you posted it in order to get feedback and advice... =P
Well, sorry, but I don't have any for you. I like it-- as a poem, anyway-- but I'd have to hear it w/ the music in order to really get a feel for it. And we both know that's not gonna happen. heh

midnitefaerie March 6 2005, 20:58:56 UTC

virginia? He wouldn't come up here, cause he's all in college and stuff. lol. I got your message. :) I'll give you a call soon. :)