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bat_hawk August 16 2011, 00:11:54 UTC
It's very appropriate that you read it on the beach!

And I cannot wait to read your new fic;)

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bat_hawk August 31 2011, 20:52:44 UTC
Thanks, darling! I am always so nervous that my humor won't translate, though I seem to have succeeded this time:D

I totally understand your situation. You should see how many things are sitting around on my computer in various states of completion. It's slightly horrifying;D

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cydnee199 August 16 2011, 03:42:57 UTC
I LOVE THIS WITH A SCARY INTENSITY!
Wooo!
Congrats on finishing!
You ever want to continue--- I'll be there with pom poms and obnoxious cheers.

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bat_hawk August 16 2011, 04:10:36 UTC
Thank you so much, dear! I will probably need all the cheers and pom poms I can get if/when I do continue;)

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siliconearth October 10 2011, 11:04:47 UTC
Ah this is so original! never read marine!Arthur before and this was just lovely. great work.

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bat_hawk October 10 2011, 21:23:34 UTC
Thanks so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it:)

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lilyfarfalla October 12 2011, 01:05:06 UTC
OMG, LIONFINS, that is the best affectionate nickname ever. This was super lovely. I hope they work out their interspecies love!!

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bat_hawk October 12 2011, 16:58:24 UTC
Thanks, doll, I'm so glad you liked it!

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bat_hawk November 30 2011, 22:37:36 UTC
Thank you so much! The funny thing about the endearments is that I was making a concentrated effort for Eames to only call Arthur darling twice. But then it just kept on fitting into the dialog so well that I couldn't have him not say it. Although I think I managed to keep it down to about five uses in 8833 words, so that is a success. I just love pet names, I can't help it!

I am glad that you were able to catch on to how cruel the mermish society is. I couldn't really talk about it too much, as Arthur wouldn't, but I am happy that it still made it across. :D

I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

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