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Filius Romanus

Sep 24, 2009 22:32

Title: Filius Romanus (Son of Rome)
Authors:
bb4eva and chamilet
Summary: An au!au set in the Roman Republic circa 50BC. A centurion in Caesar's army meets his match.
Acknowledgments: We were each others betas, so let us know if we screwed up:) Many thanks to

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lara_pinta September 26 2009, 11:11:08 UTC

This is story is developing sp nicely - wonderfully interesting plot and characterisation and of course the historical setting makes it extra intriguing.

Thanks to both you talented authors.
Lorna

chamilet September 27 2009, 04:45:06 UTC

Thank you for your kind words:)

hampshirerose September 26 2009, 19:22:02 UTC

I am spellbound by this - I love the very masculine world portrayed in your story with the (at the moment just the promise of something more intimate to come between them) - like BBM itself.

chamilet September 27 2009, 04:49:26 UTC

Glad you're enjoying our story:)

ramona4jake September 26 2009, 20:24:10 UTC

It would be great if indeed Jacobus were NOT the son of that bastard ! How can he talk like this about his son ? Even if e doesn't love him, at least out of pride he could keep his mouth shot and not trash his own kin !! What a difference n=between him and the Commander's behavior towards Innis !...I hope they wont tell Jacobus anything about this scene, on the contrary, I hope it will make Innis get to the conclusion he's better with his century than home with that scumbag !!
Thank you so much, I'm ready for next chapter !! ;o)

chamilet September 27 2009, 04:50:07 UTC

Thank you for commenting:) Hope to have the next chapter up soon.

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chamilet October 5 2009, 19:02:02 UTC

Time will tell. Glad you're enjoying the story! Sorry it took a while for me to respond:(

grlewis September 28 2009, 21:00:47 UTC

just a great job. interesting that the commander might be jacobus' father. and that he is the foster father of yannis. therer is just a hint that something will flare between yannis and jacobius. that will undoubtedly be a dangerous relationship for the two of them. ande i'm interested that the men of the unit should go to the commander. or maybe just speak in the commander's presence of what they see as unusually harsh treatment of jacobius.

aqll around interesting. so glad to see an update, i just love period pieces.

chamilet October 5 2009, 19:03:10 UTC

So glad you like it:) Sorry it took so long to respond:(