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Filius Romanus (Son of Rome)

Nov 05, 2009 05:07

Title: Filius Romanus (Son of Rome)
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soulan November 6 2009, 08:23:25 UTC

The sheet of sweat on the muscled chest in front of him pooled into a drop. Yannis watched the drop swell until it began to slide downward under it's own weight. It followed the path made by the gully where the muscles of his midsection dipped into a mid-line. The drop slowed as it came up on the hairline that filled the lower part of the grove. Yannis held his breath as the drop disappeared, into the hole formed by Jacobus' belly-button.LOL belly-button! Snork. This is one instance where I'd definitely use "navel ( ... )

Ops bb4eva November 6 2009, 14:36:01 UTC

It was the kind Commander - That had set Yannis free from his former life as a slave. Apparently he might be Jacobus' real father. But that was two chapters ago. I think you missed the last update - Chapter for on chamilet's journal - added links in the begining of this chapter for easier tracking. Hope it helps.

xoxoxox
AN

roby100 November 6 2009, 10:52:05 UTC

I am so happy for the new chapter and glad you are back. I sent PM and I was starting to worry that RL was treating you very badly!

I loved this chapter, we learn more thing about the guys, Jacobus expecially, and it was worthy the long wait.

I like the names they chose only for themselves ;)

Hugs
Roby

bb4eva November 6 2009, 14:37:53 UTC

Hugs right back at ya! Real life has been good to me, but I got very busy travelling all over the place and of course with my marriage :-) On the 23rd...yadayadayada. We should be back on track now though.

Hugs
AN

roby100 November 6 2009, 22:05:07 UTC

My last PM to you was for your wedding :)
Roby

Filius romanus argentine65 November 6 2009, 14:15:32 UTC

A long time passed but Jack and Jacobus have the same unhappy childhood. I am glad you are back with this amazing story. Thank you for sharing. Martha

Re: Filius romanus bb4eva November 6 2009, 14:41:23 UTC

Yeah - both men have their demons, don't they? I kinda reversed roles - In the OS it was Ennis traumatized by what he'd witnessed done to others. Here it is Jack. Different context of course, reflecting the local culture. Glad you like the story.

xoxoxo
AN

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bb4eva November 14 2009, 22:28:40 UTC

Thanks for the analogy, it translates my thinking working on the chapter. As usual, you always 'get me'.

xoxoxo
AN

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bb4eva November 14 2009, 22:34:10 UTC

Hi Hluv,

I am glad to see you like the tension. It's fun writing, because Ennis and Jack are actually two different people (two writers) so we get into the tension thing real well.

xoxoxo
AN