Fated Love Ch.3

[bbkraze]

 Chapter 3 : It's Midnight

Summary : the end is only the beginning.

Pairing : Topri

Rating : NC-17

Warning : Use of alcohol, sex and violence. seriously not for kids. bad english.

Disclaimer : nothing but the plot.

A/N : yeah! i finished this chapter! it took about 6 hours to complete. fuhh. because it is my first time writing smut. so i'm a little

Comments

[zenyangyin]

OH My F'en Gosh! O/////////_/////////O HOW HOT WAS THAT!? ANSWER: FLAMING!

Cant believe TOP did that, i cant hate him but i cant.... nope still love him XD But how did TOP mistake a girl to a boy hahha

I have to say you have out done yourself on this one. Those six hours where not put to waste. Its hardly believedable when you say that this is your first smut fic.

You did a Great Job! Loved every sec of it. Hope you updates very soon

[bbkraze]

yay! you are the first one! hahaXD

yeah i need to say i hate the violent TOP but i LOVEEE the possessive TOP. i don't know how TOP did that. maybe we will find out later. i dunno. haha but we're lucky he did mistake Seungri as a girl, don't you think? LOL.

yeah this is my first time writing smut. i was stuck like for 2 hours just thinking about how to write it! it seriously stressed me out! -.-" but i'm happy that you like it XD

thank you so much again!! :))))

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[thunderbunny0]

But...but...how could he do that to poor little Seungri?

He just got his heartbroken and then ... that happens :(

Seungri has a rough life.

I guess I'll just have to wait to see where you take your story.

I wonder how will Top redeem himself :)

Re: ...

[bbkraze]

yeap poor little Seungri. but i guess we just have to wait for the next chapter.

thanks for reading! :))

[yenikal]

GOD THAT'S INTENSE...HAHAHA aww poor seungri >__< and poor Daesung sure he is calling the cops XDDDD

[bbkraze]

haha . i tried lol XD

thanks for reading!

[mijahvi]

omaigad -_-
i think im dead..
ugh , such a freakin sexy ficccccc..
tabiri!!!!
u r awesome, cant wait for the next chap!! :)

[bbkraze]

LOL XD

owh dear.. please don't die first. haha because the next update will be post here soon!

thank you and thanks for reading! :))