Fate Meets Destiny: Chapter Eight

[bbmgirlfan]

Title: Fate Meets Destiny 
Author: bbmgirlfan
Pairing: Ennis/Jack (AU/AU)
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: just playing with the boys, they don't belong to me

Summary: Jack and Ennis grew up together and even went to the same college before moving back home to take over each family's business. They became roommates but that's all they were! Or, is it?

Comments

[bbmgirlfan]

LOL!

Thanks, PJ :)

Jeanine

[sienata]

excellent first kiss. now i can't wait to see what happens next. you are such a tease!!!! but that's ok, i know you'll pony up eventually! :)

[bbmgirlfan]

Such a tease? Who told?!!

You're right, it will happen eventually, though not, I'm afraid, with Sienna flair.

Thanks so much for reading and giving such encouraging feedback!

Jeanine

[denim_girl2006]

I liked it!!!!!!! I'd been waiting for this game to play out. It was funny when Jack spun the bottle purposely towards Ennis and Ennis knew....hummmm, wonder what he thought. I liked the butterfly chorus line, good description! Now I'm anxious to see what, if anything, Ennis says on the way home.

[bbmgirlfan]

Yay, glad you liked it!!

Yep, Ennis knew. I love the way they can read each other, and sometimes don't need words. I find that very sexy.

Thanks so much for reading and commenting!

Jeanine

[bbmgirlfan]

I know. I love teasing--it's so delicious!

In the next chapter, you will get a lot of Ennis's thoughts about the kiss.

Thanks so much for reading and commenting!

Jeanine

[tmn1966]

I had lost track of this story for a bit. Bad me! But at least I'm all caught up now. This is a really good story and I enjoy it.

Very interesting going to a spin the bottle party. Great first kiss and I can't wait to see what Ennis thought about it.

Thanks for continuing to share this story, even though it took me awhile to catch up with it.

Teri

[bbmgirlfan]

Hey, Teri!

I'm glad you're enjoying it.

Ennis will share his thoughts in the very next chapter.

Thanks for catching up!

Jeanine