Fate Meets Destiny: Chapter Fourteen

Apr 05, 2008 15:15

Title: Fate Meets Destiny
Author: bbmgirlfan
Pairing: Ennis/Jack (AU/AU)
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: just playing with the boys, they don't belong to me

Summary: Jack and Ennis grew up together and even went to the same college before moving back home to take over each family's business. They became roommates but that's all they were! Or, is it?

Chapter Fourteen )

fate meets destiny, au/au, jack/ennis, chapter fourteen, bbmgirlfan

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sienata December 28 2008, 07:37:45 UTC
john does seem like a very good friend, but i can't imagine him being much more. they seem too much alike, almost like brothers - nothing like lovers. i'm so glad he has a friend, tho. i know he's glad to have someone to talk to. that can only be good.

thanks for writing. hugs. s.

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bbmgirlfan December 29 2008, 06:06:13 UTC
I agree, sienata.

What Jack feels for John doesn't even compare to what he is realizing he feels for Ennis. Like you said, though, Jack needs someone other than Ennis to talk to and John will be a great friend.

Thanks for your feedback!

Jeanine

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bluehyacinthe December 28 2008, 10:54:40 UTC
Such a perfect date!. John seems like a nice person, very open and sensitive. Jack is being sensible about not wanting to rush into any relationship yet. Very curious to know what John thinks about Jack, though.

Very interesting chapter. Thanks!

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bbmgirlfan December 29 2008, 06:29:26 UTC
John likes him and is disappointed that he won't get to pursue the relationship. Who ever likes getting the "friend" speech?

But he may think that if he hangs around long enough, he'll be able to wait out this crush on Ennis and be there when Jack is over it. Poor thing, 'cause that will never happen!

Thanks for reading and commenting!

Jeanine

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120cassie December 28 2008, 11:04:20 UTC
Jack needs someone to confide in and John is the ideal person..

I don't think it can be any more between them, just good friends.. I'm glad Jack has John - it will help him understand himself better :)

Hugs
Julie

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bbmgirlfan December 29 2008, 06:34:38 UTC
I'm glad Jack has John - it will help him understand himself better :)

You're right, and that's happening already.

Thanks for reading and commenting!

Jeanine

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mariez65 December 28 2008, 13:11:45 UTC
I'm so glad Jack has a new friend in John. It always helps to know that, whatever issues we have in life, that others have experienced and survived the same things. But Jack is right that you can't force yourself to "fall in love" with someone. Nicely done. On to Chap. 14 - thanks!

Marie

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bbmgirlfan December 29 2008, 07:04:14 UTC
Nicely done.

Thanks so much, Marie, for such encouraging feedback!

Jeanine

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denim_girl2006 January 2 2009, 23:33:57 UTC
It's just like in the movie, each of them has already lost their heart so can't give it to anyone else.

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bbmgirlfan January 3 2009, 02:47:12 UTC
How true!!

Thanks for that insight.

Jeanine

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