LJ Idol Season What?!, Week 1 - "Jayus"

[beautyofgrey]

At the stoplight
the belt on my car
--the one I took to be fixed yesterday--
begins to squeal again.

First a light
whiffle whifflebeneath the hum of the heater

Comments

[grail76]

Nods. I've felt that way.

[beautyofgrey]

I'm sorry, and yet, I'm glad. <3

[beautyofgrey]

Thank you. <3

[beautyofgrey]

Thank you, though I'm sorry you've had a similar moment. Life is just like that some days, though, isn't it?

[eeyore_grrl]

I've had that car.

[beautyofgrey]

*grins* Then I'm glad you can relate.

[eska818]

Lovely. Also poetry makes you unique so far. :)

[beautyofgrey]

Thank you! (And I think that eeyore_grrl and spydielives each have some poetry up their sleeves this week.)