Comments | beederiffic: Fic: Let The Light In (The Eagle, AU), Chapter 12

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Fic: Let The Light In (The Eagle, AU), Chapter 12

Mar 24, 2014 12:49

Title: Let The Light In, Chapter 12
Pairing: Esca/Marcus
Rating: NC-17
Length: 6.5k
Warnings:
Summary: Marcus and Esca are acrobats performing in a Vegas circus spectacular, and Marcus is trying to figure out what's happening between them.

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esca/marcus, fic

Comments 5

christyimnotred March 26 2014, 06:17:09 UTC

Perfect! Loved the cuddling and Esca admitting he likes Marcus more than he wants to. And the sex was very hot! Marcus is really going outside his comfort zone with Esca, which is great. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter.

chomiji July 10 2014, 03:34:48 UTC

Ahhhh. ... oh dear, whatever happened with this? I was enjoying it a great deal.

theoriesontales September 1 2014, 15:24:12 UTC

I've really enjoyed this so far!

reeeeei April 1 2015, 17:22:02 UTC

THIS FIC DESTROYED ME, IT'S TOO GOOD

delvinan April 29 2015, 00:58:15 UTC

I'm guessing there won't be more of this, which is so, so sad, because it's so very good, I mean, absolutely fantastic... I love how each character has his/her own voice (e.g. Noz's perfect but slightly stilted English, and even including Québecois swear-words!), how everything about this world is so full of utterly convincing detail. Marcus and Esca's interactions are so intense and erotic, while at the same time there are these lovely touches of humour, such as, to quote but one gem from this last part:

Which is why I've figured out I owe you an apology.” The fingers dug deeper and more painfully, like Esca couldn't say he was sorry for anything without exacting some revenge.In a way we have reached the beginning of a resolution here, but I'm sure there was originally more planned for these too, which I'm very sad may never now see the light of day. I'd hoped Marcus's mum would come and see the show, and that more of the developing dynamic would unfold. If there ever were the chance you'd pick thisup again, I'd be thrilled to bits ( ... )