Tough Crowd

[beldarzfixon]

"J-toff!" "J-toff

Comments

[lawchicky]

Ugh- and I laughed and then laughed at myself for laughing.

[beldarzfixon]

That's the way it usually works. =)

[tsuki_no_bara]

i love the way aasha explains the joke she liked - how the half-dozen are afraid of seven. hee! it's always interesting (and sometimes really fun) to see how jokes do and don't translate. i really like the world-building, too.

[beldarzfixon]

I am kinda world-building piecemeal with these stories. As I come up with something cultural for the eledonks and it's like, "of course, they would do/have that."
It's occurred to me that world-building is a bit like making your own sudoku puzzle, in that at some point I can't put this or that story element or cultural aspect in because it doesn't fit with all the other elements I've committed to the puzzle -- everything has to be correct in all directions or the story won't work.

[elledanger]

You do such a lovely turn at description in this piece - well done!

[beldarzfixon]

Thank you!

[labelleizzy]

late coming to the party, but this is cute!

[beldarzfixon]

You're still on time =) Thanks!

[roina_arwen]

Very cute!

[beldarzfixon]

Thank you!