Fearfully and Wonderfully

Apr 17, 2017 10:46

Did I ask to be made ( Read more... )

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lolaslaughter April 17 2017, 18:13:28 UTC
This made me cry (in a good way!!) ❤️❤️ 'The Velveteen Rabbit' is one of my favorite stories and this entry brought me right back to that book!! ❤️🐰❤️ You really made me feel for the toy and I absolutely adored the innocent and non judgmental view of Shelly!! Such a great entry!! 😁😁

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beldarzfixon April 17 2017, 18:44:40 UTC
I didn't have VR in mind, but there are some similarities -- of course, I've always seen plush friends as "real"

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i_17bingo April 17 2017, 22:22:30 UTC
Oh, poor dogbearmonkey. Your suffering made the sweetness of the ending that much more satisfying. I really enjoyed this piece.

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beldarzfixon April 18 2017, 16:16:49 UTC
Thanks! If I could sew, I'd consider making dogbearmonkeys to share the love =)

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beeker121 April 18 2017, 16:11:30 UTC
Beardogmonkey isn't the right toy for just anyone, but eventually someone had to recognize the love with which he/she was made, even if not the skill. This is warm and happy, and the POV is wonderful.

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beldarzfixon April 18 2017, 16:18:54 UTC
When one's primary sense is touch rather than sight, being the softest then becomes the advantage. I like playing with the points of view -- this story wasn't first-person until I actually started writing it down.

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d0gs April 18 2017, 17:08:13 UTC
this made me cry too <3 i love the ending so much!

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beldarzfixon April 19 2017, 17:52:04 UTC
*hands you tissue* Thanks!

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eternal_ot April 19 2017, 08:31:39 UTC
Ah! This was cool. I too enjoyed the POV and and happy that Shelly found her mate or viceversa. A nice take!

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beldarzfixon April 19 2017, 17:52:32 UTC
Looks like they found each other. Thank you!

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