Comments | beldarzfixon: Is it You?

beldarzfixon

Is it You?

Nov 03, 2019 10:04

Remembering childhood, the games you would play ( Read more... )

lj idol, lji season 11, poetry

Comments 22

adoptedwriter November 3 2019, 18:08:37 UTC

So true.

beldarzfixon November 4 2019, 00:20:09 UTC

*nods*

kittenboo November 3 2019, 21:23:25 UTC

I like how this flows together!

beldarzfixon November 4 2019, 00:19:17 UTC

Thanks!

md_meezer November 4 2019, 02:06:33 UTC

so very true.

static_abyss November 4 2019, 06:12:21 UTC

I love rhyming poems and they are so satisfying to read. I hope it is as satisfying to you because I know it is very hard to get them to flow as effortlessly as yours does.

beldarzfixon November 7 2019, 02:48:52 UTC

I was still taken by surprise at how hard crafting those few lines were, getting the pacing right, with the right words.

sweeny_todd November 4 2019, 11:18:51 UTC

Yes. Yes. this is... frustratingly accurate.