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Nov 26, 2008 20:18

Title: The Ice Flowers [oneshot]
Pairing: JaeMin
Genre: Angst, AU
Rating: PG
Summary: Days blend together and repeat each other. Jaejoong slowly fades out of Changmin's life. Literally.

“You’re home early” he said, his voice sounding like it came from the underworld. )

jaemin, dbsk, fanfiction

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mrsedjack November 27 2008, 08:07:12 UTC
;___________________; No happy ending?

This is really, really creepy and beautiful both. The transfer from darkness to light, and the lifelessness.

I don't like Jaejoong here. :( Who'd rather spend time with flowers and coldness when you could spend time with Changmin? -rollseyes-

Really, really beautiful. :) I can tell that you probably used a while to get it written. <3

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belfire November 27 2008, 18:06:33 UTC
No happy ending. Even Jae in the mirror was a compromise and I inserted it only to keep things creepy.

Well, Jaejoong is... not really Jaejoong anymore. He faded out. He is in another world, where he initially belonged. The mermaid tears were veela tears in the original, but I decided too few people know about them and changed it. In Bulgarian folklore veelas are mythical creatures who take female shape and uh, woo (XD) mortal men who can only control them if they steal their shadow. Or if the veelas happen to like them.

Thank you! :3

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just_me_kalista November 28 2008, 04:58:24 UTC
gorgeous.

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belfire November 28 2008, 13:16:20 UTC
thank you <3

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belfire December 26 2008, 13:42:58 UTC
It's not a physical dimension. He went there subconsciously, he didn't want to let go of Jae.
Don't hate him, things like that happen ^^;

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