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bella_harvest

WC: Chicago - Epilogue

May 12, 2012 11:25

White Collar -- Fanfiction

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Title: Chicago - Epilogue

Rating: PG-13
Category: Pre-canon, Alternate canon, Neal Mozzie friendship, Hurt/Comfort, Drama

( Chicago - Epilogue )

neal mozzie friendship, pre-canon, gen, alternate canon, hurt/comfort, peter neal friendship, white collar

Comments 28

iamhere23 May 12 2012, 19:31:31 UTC

Wow, I'm so glad you finished! Mozzie rocks in this story (and paying for Neal to be free was perfect, he would totally do that for him). I also liked Annie. What a wonderful character.
This was awesome, thanks for sharing! :)

bella_harvest May 12 2012, 19:50:18 UTC

I'm happy you enjoyed it. I guess Mozzie is never afraid to throw money at a problem, especially if it helps getting his favorite co-con out of a sticky situation!

micheleeeex May 12 2012, 19:33:35 UTC

I love this!

bella_harvest May 12 2012, 19:53:11 UTC

Thank you. I try to please...

robingal1 May 13 2012, 02:38:02 UTC

Squeeee! Oh that was brilliant!
well done all around! ^_^
I loved the youthful anger of Neal. And the part when Mozzie buys the chocolate milk. And lastly, the epilogue when Peter comes into it all.
wonderful. thank you so much.

bella_harvest May 13 2012, 13:59:23 UTC

Aww, thank you. The part with Peter was more of an afterthought. I always love when they do that in shows and movies, have a flash forward at the end to show what may become of the characters down the line.

nieseryjna May 13 2012, 15:07:26 UTC

the idea with epilogue was fantastic, lol and Peter covering for Neal was great! The whole story was perfect, and Mozzie, oh my god we need more Mozzie stories!

bella_harvest May 13 2012, 15:24:54 UTC

Thank you. I like Mozzie, but a little Mozzie goes a long way for me, on TV and in stories. But sometimes he's a fun character to play around with.

alvahana May 15 2012, 11:41:48 UTC

I love your version of how Neal and Mozzie met! And this epilogue brought tears to my eyes, so warm and sweet. Thank you for writing such a fantastic story! :)

bella_harvest May 15 2012, 13:28:05 UTC

Thank you. I always imagined that Mozzie and Neal went back a little further than what was ultimately revealed in Forging Bonds. I was almost a little disappointed in the show's version. The two have such a sweet and peculiar fondness of each other and are unconditionally accepting of each other's quirks and shortcomings (no pun intended, Mozz!) that I felt there must have been more history there.
Thanks again for reading and commenting. It's always great to get feedback.