WC: Need - Part 7: Love

Aug 04, 2012 20:39


White Collar -- Fanfiction

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All recognizable characters are property of Jeff Eastin and USA Network. 
No copyright infringement intended.

Title:  Need (Part 7 - Love)
  • Rating: R
  • Warnings:  Language, Violence, Sexual References including NonCon, PTSD
  • Spoilers:  none
  • Category: Hurt/Comfort, Drama, Peter-Neal-Elizabeth Friendship
Summary:

When Neal ( Read more... )

hurt/comfort, peter neal friendship, drama, white collar

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Comments 41

robingal1 August 5 2012, 01:05:56 UTC
I love you.
You're amazing and this fic of yours has been getting "refreshed" for several DAYS now. I have been impatiently waiting for your wondrous updates.
Thank you.
Thank you so much!
*goes back to the beginning, reads again*

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bella_harvest August 5 2012, 01:17:33 UTC
Thank you. I love you too???

I'd say your life is on a frightening downward spiral, but then *I'm* the one writing this stuff all night. So, carry on...

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winterstar95 August 5 2012, 01:19:10 UTC
Writing a story like this is not only difficult but draining. I appreciate the work and love you put in to this story. I also think you left it at the right place. Sometime you have to leave them a little broken to be real to the story. Thank you for a fabulous read.

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bella_harvest August 5 2012, 01:33:27 UTC
I wouldn't have finished it without all the support and encouragement on here. I just checked the document history and I started writing the story in May 2011! And then it sat untouched for over a year. I'm very grateful for all the wonderful feedback that pushed me along. It would have felt like a waste to not finish it.

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winterstar95 August 5 2012, 01:45:50 UTC

Anytime you need encouragement or someone to bounce ideas off of just send me a pm, my free time is spent writing or editing or on LJ. I love your writing and hope you keep it up!

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bella_harvest August 5 2012, 02:05:28 UTC
Thank you. I'll keep that in mind. For the immediate future, I'm looking forward to getting back to do some reading. I have a hard time reading when I'm actively working on a story.

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anonymous August 5 2012, 02:26:54 UTC
Wow, this whole story was amazing, from start to finish! It was always so exciting to see that another chapter had been posted. It was one of those stories that I just wanted to go on and on and never end. But the ending was so good. Not a storybook perfect happy ending, we know it's still going to be a long haul for Neal and the Burkes. The ending was right for the story. Thank you!

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bella_harvest August 5 2012, 02:54:35 UTC
Thank you. I knew pretty much from the start that the story was going to end with Neal safe and sandwiched in the Burkes' bed. I didn't know whether that would be back in NY or not. It felt right to leave them in this very intimate setting of their sanctuary.

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aliwc August 5 2012, 02:28:23 UTC
Found this not long ago. It's a heartbreaking story written quite beautifully. And you ended it well. You did a good job. Thank you.

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bella_harvest August 5 2012, 02:57:18 UTC
Thanks so much for reading. I'm happy to see so many people got a kick out of what was purely self-indulgence for the most part!

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kanarek13 August 5 2012, 03:00:51 UTC
Well, this is certainly a WC night for me :D

Thank you soooo much for this amazing story! You are truly amazing and this story is perfect in every aspect. I know you've been a bit worried about finding the right ending - I say you've succeeded because the ending is, well, perfect. There is still a long wah ahead for all of them but there is love and hope and it makes me confident things will eventually get better for them. As long as they are together, it will be okay :D

Of course, I love the cuddles at the end and something tells me things will not necessarily change in that department once they are back home, even though they say something different now :D

And the epitaph - the man looking for Neal Caffrey - EPIC! :D

Thank you again *hugs* Brilliant \o/ And I don't mean to sound greedy or anything but I am really looking forward to your next story :P

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bella_harvest August 5 2012, 03:20:47 UTC
Thank you, thank you. Enough with the compliments already or they will go to my head and siphon off blood from my typing fingers!!!

You are of course entitled to envision all kinds of cuddles going on in that plush Brooklyn bedroom. Which is what I will go and do right now because it is bedtime for me.

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