Fic: Say When (J/J, NC-17) 2/4

Jul 05, 2011 14:29



Chapter Two ~ Give me the squeal of tyres.

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ahab99 July 5 2011, 14:50:29 UTC
Oh, Christ. I love the way it's so drawn out even though they both know where they're headed, and the way James is just playing with Jeremy to help him move along.

Confident!James may just be the best thing in the entire universe!

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bellap74 July 5 2011, 21:31:15 UTC
*squish*

Thanks for reading, I'm glad you liked it! It's weird how this confident!James won't rush things, the idea was supposed to be a 2K one-off but he insists on a certain pace - all the better to trap a Jeremy ;D

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extreme_queen July 5 2011, 16:29:43 UTC
I've been thinking about this fic all day. I have the most delicious image of James writing down all of that erotica for Jeremy and no one else in the room having a clue.

I could feel myself getting hot as I read this, so I think it's safe to say that you've got erotic poetry nailed - and by the end of this fic I have a feeling that James will have Jeremy nailed as well! ;)

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bellap74 July 5 2011, 21:32:30 UTC
Yay you liked it! Thanks for reading, hun.
I like James when he's being sneaky and I think he'd love sharing the secret with Jezza but no one else ;)

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wyvernchick July 5 2011, 19:40:46 UTC
Is it me or is it getting warm in here?

&hearts

MOAR PLZ :)

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bellap74 July 5 2011, 21:35:54 UTC
*fans you*

It's all Jeremy's fault for being adorable! Thanks for reading x

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marginaliana July 5 2011, 22:21:50 UTC
nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnngh

My tongue can be such a wet tricky whore.

Oh, fuck me, that's incredibly hot. Jesus.

I'm loving confident James and the slow, aching build-up to the two of them together. The way he knows that emotions are easier for Jeremy than sex - yes, that really rings true to me. And then their little schoolboy games during the meeting, passing notes - glee! So adorable!

I love every bit of this OMG.

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bellap74 July 9 2011, 11:21:10 UTC
*comment-backlog*

I'm so, so , so very happy that you enjoyed part 2 and that the man!poetry worked. The fic has turned out to be quite a slow mover but I think that's James' style so he refused to be rushed ;)

I do see Jeremy and the way he's so emotional as being the way he connects easiest whereas he has physical doubts and a critical view of himself that would make sexual vulnerability harder for him.

Thanks for reading x

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deliciousmelody July 5 2011, 23:57:45 UTC
x_____x

I'm dead now. Really.

You MUST post MORE now.

My heart was in my throat when James first handed Jeremy the poem - oh my god. I know you've had your hesitations with the concept of this fic, but they are not needed. It's fantastic and I absolutely love every word! It's so deliciously drawn out, and so... indulgent. Gah!

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bellap74 July 9 2011, 11:24:57 UTC
*late response is late*

Yay, you liked it - relief and happiness \o/
This fic is very much James and so it has refused to do anything other than go slowly and set things up properly XD I wanted a 2K poetry!shag, James did NOT.

Thanks for reading *squish*

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