After All This Time... (12/?)

[bellataggart]

Title: After All This Time

Comments

[whitelder]

Erica got the wrong idea again, setting them back another step :P

[bellataggart]

i know, i'm sorry- i couldn't help myself :)

[pinkwhiskers]

I squeeled when I saw your post, wheeeee! I love the premise of this story and I especially love how your maturity and major writing skillz do justice to your jaw-dropping ideas. Yes, I do mean the pick your mouth off the floor kind of plot-twist. I was getting into the groove with a renewed, comfortable Callica when bad-timing Jane punked Callie. You put a whole new spin on one step forwards two steps back eh? But that's good storytelling for you heh! And I'm a sucker for a good Callica fix :p

[bellataggart]

Haha, Thank you :) You are way too kind...

i knew i was going to do the Jane punk almost from the very beginning, and had been debating with myself on whether i should go ahead and do it or not for weeks. But in the end, i couldnt stop myself. i just had too much fun with it :)

But not to worry, one way or another, 1 step forward 2 steps back and all, they will get there :)

and the next chapter should be up within 2 days max,( maybe even before since i feel like i'm on a roll), and i'm hoping that your jaw is gonna drop a little more.

[greys_1]

This story is giving me potential heart problems. i swear it was beating out of my chest reading the 'shoulder touching' moment. this was written so perfectally, callie's realisation. erica slipping through the Dr Hahn mask periodically. and then a potential date - untill you throw jane back into the picture. friends is ok, but i think erica will not understand. and just when they were making progress.

Fav part - when erica had to 'trap her arm' away from callie. i imagine she will be having a lot of internal arguements about those feelings. so intense - thanks :)

[bellataggart]

Ooh, don't get heart problems.
i promise, things will settle down soon enough. Of course before they do, i can tell you, something's gonna have to give. if you know what i mean (wink wink) :)

Thank you so much for reading and letting me know your thoughts :)

[vinjii]

We're melting awesome and those two are wonderful. I love how natural they advance, it's not forced, it's just the way it's supposed to go. And of course Erica will set them a step back, that's fine. I love this so much ♥

[bellataggart]

Thank you so much vinjii :)

[s16s]

I completely agree with greys_1 that this is giving me potential heart problems..between the touching and jane showing up..i lost my breath a few times. i love this so much. and i love how you aren't trying to rush anything..it is going to happen in its own time (i hope..eventually..) great update!!

[bellataggart]

in all honesty its giving me heart problems as well :) but the whole drama is so much fun to write, i cant help myself.

Rest assured, things will happen. And soon. :)

Thank you so much!