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music_is_breath March 28 2009, 18:09:30 UTC
I just read the whole story so far, all at once and I must say that you're doing such a wonderful job here!!!
It almost hurts to see how slow they're finding each other again... and at the same time it's what makes it so fantastic! :D

I absolutely adored the "shoulder-touching" moment in this part.
It's amazing how you made this visible in my head!
and then again... we're with the slow part again... ;)

arrgh, I want to read more now, can't wait to see what happens! :)

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bellataggart March 30 2009, 09:42:31 UTC
Thank you so much! and wellcome aboard :)

They are definitely a slow pair, 1 step forward, 2 steps back-but things are gonna start going a little faster pretty soon cause in all honesty i cant take it anymore :) Gotta let off some steam, i think.

Thanks again for the kinds words, and i hope you like the next part as well, which should be up within 2 days..

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torres_is_hawt March 28 2009, 20:46:34 UTC
Man they got SO CLOSE to something. I got so excited when she was going to ask her to Joe's. DOH! More please. :)

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bellataggart March 30 2009, 09:45:50 UTC
Hehe :) They did, didn't they?

They are gonna get a little closer soon, just between us :)

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q_wordy13 March 29 2009, 05:42:59 UTC
I am right there with everybody else who has commented -- SO CLOSE. I'm having a Charlie Brown flying through the air after trying to kick the football moment here -- Arrrrrggh!

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bellataggart March 30 2009, 09:51:58 UTC
Haha, thats a great way to put it :)

i promise to make it better, soon. Though what i have planned for the next chapter might either release some energy or frustrate you even more. i'm not sure, but either way it's gonna be up soon, hope you like it :)

Thank you so much for reading and the comment :)

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anonymous September 1 2009, 20:49:24 UTC
update please!!

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magicmumu October 1 2009, 06:14:22 UTC
"Like everything she wanted to achieve and be were coming into focus in big bright colors."

*Whispers to my neighbor before getting shushed* Because she is now wearing glasses...

Damn you Jane. *hiss*

Erin

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