Comments | bellatemple: SPN Fic: Words Like Violence (1/1) AU

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SPN Fic: Words Like Violence (1/1) AU

Jun 04, 2008 03:02

Title: Words Like Violence
Author: Bella Temple
Category: SPN, AU, Het, drama
Rating: Teen
Warnings: AU, some language, character death
Spoilers: Nothing past the pilot
Characters: Sam/Jess, Dean
Disclaimer: The characters and basic premise within are property of Warner Bros, Eric Kripke, etc. No money is being made off this work of fiction.
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fic: but deadly 'verse

Comments 98

smilla02 June 4 2008, 22:19:28 UTC

This is a great AU. I love how you mixed it with canon but made it something completely different all the same.

bellatemple June 4 2008, 22:23:19 UTC

To me, that's what an AU really is. A reimagining of canon, which means taking into account as much canon detail as possible while still twisting everything to shape a single change in events.

art_savage June 5 2008, 00:29:40 UTC

Damn, what an interesting take on things. Love me some silent!Dean. I hope to see more of this 'verse soon!

bellatemple June 5 2008, 00:47:35 UTC

Thank you. I rather love him too.

counteragent June 5 2008, 01:02:30 UTC

AWESOME. Except--you killed Jess just when I was starting to get to know her! Wah.

Love Dean's signing and wicked writing. It's a strange thing to contemplate, but it truly works here.

I hope that they meet up with Mary at some point.

This is seriously cool!

bellatemple June 5 2008, 01:03:32 UTC

For a second, I read that as "Dean's singing" and I was all "wait, when did he do that -- oohhhhhhh."

Glad you liked it! Lord knows I've had it in my head long enough.

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bellatemple June 5 2008, 01:37:24 UTC

To me, those are the "true" AUs. I'm not saying the others aren't good, they certainly can be. But I've always been fascinated by the "only one change" AU ideas.

sylvanwitch June 5 2008, 01:57:25 UTC

Oh, exceptional retelling of the events we can only intuit pre-Pilot. I love that we're seeing this from Jess' POV, and I really appreciate the details here, like the clutter in the apartment, for example, and the way you include facial expressions and tone of voice. You've created a fully realized world here, and I'm anxious to read more!

bellatemple June 5 2008, 02:02:14 UTC

Gestures and facial expressions always make their way into my fics. I blame my short fiction professor in college.

Thanks for reading, and I'm glad you enjoyed it. Once I work out which of the handful of story bits in my head will get thrown into the next one, more will be on its way.