But Deadly 'verse: The Reasons

Nov 14, 2008 01:30

Title: The Reasons
Author: Bella Temple
Category: SPN, AU, gen, drama
Rating: Teen
Warnings: Generally the same as the previous installments
Spoilers: First season, some mention of information from 4x03
Characters: Mary, Bobby, Sam, Dean
Disclaimer: The characters and basic premise within are property of Warner Bros, Eric Kripke, etc. No money is ( Read more... )

fic: but deadly 'verse

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ratcreature November 14 2008, 06:44:03 UTC
Ack! What an evil cliffhanger! I liked this part and Sam and Mary's conversation though.

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bellatemple November 14 2008, 06:46:31 UTC
Good to hear, since I'm pretty sure this is one of the shortest parts, yet. ;D

Thanks! And don't worry, I probably won't leave you all on that cliff for too long.

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exitosus November 14 2008, 06:46:42 UTC
ahhhhhhh! lol sorry. that was just the emotion I felt at the end of this chapter. you're killing me! I love it though lol. Please continue and soon

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bellatemple November 14 2008, 06:47:16 UTC
Oh, there's no question of this being continued. And yes, hopefully it'll be soon.

Thanks!

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smokeyhorse November 14 2008, 08:31:49 UTC
AHHHHHH OMG!!! I absolutely LOVE this verse and I freaked when I saw you wrote more in it! *big grin*

Talk about a nice Supernatural night surprise. :)

I think I'm as irritated with Mary as Sam is LOL. And the demons have Dean now! GAHHHHH! EVIL CLIFFIE! *flails*

K, I'm off to save this to Delicious now. :D

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bellatemple November 14 2008, 15:32:07 UTC
Oh Mary definitely deserves the irritation, if not more. I enjoyed working with the idea of Sam not being happy with his parent no matter which one it was, since often times in the "Mary survives" fics, people pull a brotherly role reversal. . . .

And hey, the evil cliff hangers had to come in at some point, right?

Glad you enjoyed it and thanks for reading!

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lilacsigil November 14 2008, 11:26:56 UTC
Of course Mary is hurting and feeling guilty, not to mention unsure how to talk to Dean - and she's taking the Dean way out by shutting up and being snappy with Sam. Sam can see through that in one second flat! I'm glad Sam found out about Samuel and Deanna, too. But Dean! Missing! Oh noes! Must have more fic!

I find Mary thinking that Dean looks like John interesting, because I think they look nothing alike, but they behave and move in very much the same way, so it must be very familiar to her. Sam, of course, looks more like John and is more like him in personality, but has a very different demeanour. Someone who didn't know John well would think that Sam was the one who would remind Mary of her husband.

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bellatemple November 14 2008, 15:35:39 UTC
Heh. I based that statement partially on images I've seen of a young JDM -- who actually looks a fair bit like Jensen. ;D Interestingly enough, young Jim Beaver bears a rather amusing resemblance to Jared. . . .

I had a lot of fun playing with familial similarities in my characterization of Mary in this, as well. I'm glad you enjoyed it, and no worries, I'll hopefully have more pretty soon.

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a2zmom November 14 2008, 12:37:38 UTC
More! Immediately!

You've managed to make them even more screwed up than they are on the show. Which is quite an acomplishment.

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bellatemple November 14 2008, 15:36:06 UTC
It wasn't easy, let me tell you. . . . ;D

More will come soon!

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