But Deadly 'verse: The Reasons

Nov 14, 2008 01:30

Title: The Reasons
Author: Bella Temple
Category: SPN, AU, gen, drama
Rating: Teen
Warnings: Generally the same as the previous installments
Spoilers: First season, some mention of information from 4x03
Characters: Mary, Bobby, Sam, Dean
Disclaimer: The characters and basic premise within are property of Warner Bros, Eric Kripke, etc. No money is ( Read more... )

fic: but deadly 'verse

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muffaletta November 14 2008, 13:45:17 UTC
What a chapter! Started out slowly, built to the confrontation between Mary and Sam, to Dean's unexpected kidnapping. Just loved it! Looking forward to reading more...

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bellatemple November 14 2008, 15:36:59 UTC
Thanks! I was a little afraid this chapter would be too vignettey, but then I started to realize where the 'verse was going and went "oooooo".

Glad you're enjoying it.

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art_savage November 14 2008, 14:17:12 UTC
Love. This. 'Verse. *pets it*

Looking forward to more...

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bellatemple November 14 2008, 15:37:22 UTC
More is definitely to come.

Thanks for reading!

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kjfri November 14 2008, 15:05:00 UTC
you are EVOL! I've been so looking forward to more of this and this - THIS - is where you leave us hanging?!!! You big tease. I need more, more, more!!

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bellatemple November 14 2008, 15:37:57 UTC
More will come! Hopefully a lot sooner than this chapter did. ;D

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adrenalineshots November 14 2008, 16:32:07 UTC
I don't remember if I ever left any comment on this story, but if I haven't, my bad. This verse is absolutely amazing! I've loved every single part that you've posted so far and this last one... wow! Despite Mary's reasons, you've made me hate her just a little bit, which is hard because I love that charater, but so many of these characters are so ambiguous that its hard to not have mixed feelings about them. Bottom line of my rambling: I love this! Please post more, soon!

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bellatemple November 14 2008, 16:58:06 UTC
I have to admit, Mary's reactions in this story surprised me a little -- I expected a lot more guilt and self recrimination from her rather than her steadfastly insisting that she's not sorry.

She reminds me a lot of Dean in how she came out, here.

I'm glad you're enjoying it, and I should hopefully have more put together to post soon!

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ulkis November 14 2008, 18:45:03 UTC
Nooo! Cliffhanger!

(This was great!)

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bellatemple November 14 2008, 18:59:32 UTC
Mwahahahahahahaha!

(Thanks!)

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