But Deadly 'verse: The Reasons

Nov 14, 2008 01:30

Title: The Reasons
Author: Bella Temple
Category: SPN, AU, gen, drama
Rating: Teen
Warnings: Generally the same as the previous installments
Spoilers: First season, some mention of information from 4x03
Characters: Mary, Bobby, Sam, Dean
Disclaimer: The characters and basic premise within are property of Warner Bros, Eric Kripke, etc. No money is ( Read more... )

fic: but deadly 'verse

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canadiangoddess November 14 2008, 19:13:16 UTC
It took so long for this part and now you've given us a cliffhanger?? You are so mean!!! I still love this verse, even if you have been doing not nice things to Dean.

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bellatemple November 14 2008, 19:22:42 UTC
Hey, I had to figure out how to incorporate (or not incorporate) the new canon.

Also, yes. I'm terribly, terribly evil.

Thanks for reading, though!

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ifyouweremine November 14 2008, 19:39:10 UTC
EEE! #faints#

What a fabulous chapter. I like that Sam called Mary out on her behavior and was trying to get her to talk to Dean--because she needs to do that, she needs to take responsibility for what she did to Dean, how badly she screwed him up.

And then that ENDING was so awful and so good! Dean was kidnapped right under their noses, OMG. I'm dying to find out what happens next! <333

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bellatemple November 14 2008, 19:45:27 UTC
In my darker moments, I have this highly amusing mental image of a wide shot of Mary and Sam arguing in front of the window while we can see Dean getting silently and fairly comically abducted in the background.

Thanks! And yes, Mary seriously needs to get her head out of her ass. But then, she really is a Winchester, whatever she says. . . .

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bellatemple November 14 2008, 21:32:23 UTC
Part of what I love about the show is the realism in the details of characterization, both good and bad, for the main characters. So, naturally, I tried to pull that realism into this AU, especially in the character of Mary.

I love the idea that, if the tables were turned, she'd end up just as screwed up, stubborn, and infuriating to Sam as John would. . . .

Thanks for reading, and yes, I hope to have the next bit of this readable soon.

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bellatemple November 14 2008, 23:51:25 UTC
Thanks! And hey, everybody's doing it. . . . ;D

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lomer November 15 2008, 05:26:15 UTC
I love this series!

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bellatemple November 15 2008, 05:27:41 UTC
Thank you!

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