Ms. Tassler ( Read more... )

Dear CBS ( Read more... )

So, we've gone through the angst of getting together, the love scenes, now, I suppose, the next step is proposal then marriage, and baby... but really, those are harder to write, and not NEARLY as much fun!

so, should I gloss it?

Now we're getting somewhere!

Chapter 6: Veritas

I know the middle, I think i know teh end, but it's the start.

It just sounds so typical,so trite, to start this chapter with a dialogue discussing the coitus interruptus of teh previous chapter... but I think that's my only course of action...

Less angsty, but still not quite happily ever after just yet.

Chapter 5: Absolution

Watching The Performer... seeing Derek stop himself from calling Pen 'baby girl' and going for Penelope instead-that hurt....

Chapter 4, Supplication, posted.

Less angsty, we're on the road to recovery, FINALLY, but it wont be an easy road to happily ever after...

Chapter 4: Supplication

so, they are broken, completely... how do I get them back where they need to be ( Read more... )