Comments | belyste: Say You're Mine (J2, NC-17) 7/7

belyste

Say You're Mine (J2, NC-17) 7/7

Jun 09, 2009 03:45

( Part Seven )

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sloane_m June 10 2009, 10:58:41 UTC

Oh *happy sigh* that was just superb. I loved everything about this. It was a seriously great piece of writing with some terrific characterisation. God I enjoyed this.

belyste June 17 2009, 05:36:20 UTC

Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it, especially the characterization!

jord_el June 10 2009, 11:27:14 UTC

Loved this. Epic WIN.

belyste June 17 2009, 05:36:43 UTC

Thank you!

bflyw June 10 2009, 11:47:16 UTC

"To great fanfics!"

belyste June 17 2009, 05:37:35 UTC

Hee, thanks! Glad you liked it!

faith_mars June 10 2009, 11:50:29 UTC

Ha, awesome! Totally love it :)

belyste June 17 2009, 05:37:51 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!

radiophile June 10 2009, 11:55:27 UTC

This was awesome! I love HIMYM, and it was so much fun picking out all the references in this :D I just about killed myself laughing at Jensen's Robin Sparkle Fall 2 F8 secret XD (BRICK PANTS.)

Just a couple minor edits, though: some of your paragraph/line breaks a bit wonky, and in part 1 you call Mike "Chad" ;)

belyste June 17 2009, 05:40:34 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad the Robin Sparkles reveal made you laugh! (Seriously, the brick pants just made it way too easy!) And hee, your icon! Oh, NPH.

And thanks for catching that wayward Chad (hanging Chad?) and the formatting stuff!