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berryboys July 11 2015, 21:39:09 UTC
I'm going to leave it this way, sorry! ^^ But it's great to hear that about the ending, thank you ;)

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charliebnim July 11 2015, 02:17:06 UTC
Oh lord... I cant believe this ended this was oh god !!!!!* i want moreeee
So addicting tbh

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berryboys July 12 2015, 01:20:54 UTC
hahaha it had to end though! And thank you, because I was unsure about if this was boring while I was writing it, so your comment is a relief <3

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jonginsmuse July 12 2015, 01:29:50 UTC
Oh my! This is amazing. What an ending! This AU could go on and on. Like what happened to the other boys Chanyeol and kyungsoo? What's going on in the suburbs, the war, the other groups, Baekhyun's parents!!! How Baekhyun is changing...that he would try to hide away the baby as another class!...ugh so much left to work with. This is really great. Hope there's more but even if not it was a great read. THANK YOU! ❤️❤️❤️

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jonginsmuse July 12 2015, 01:35:33 UTC
The ending reminded me of the movie the man in the iron mask. In it the king of France kept his twin brother imprisoned and wearing an iron mask so no one could see his face, but eventually the twin goes on to impersonate the king

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berryboys July 12 2015, 12:07:23 UTC
thank you!!! :D You don't have to thank me, I'm happy you liked it haha. I know the fic has plenty of loose ends, but the open ending is for everyone to imagine their own version (I could give you mine, but that would be no fun ;) ... I would probably keep making everyone miserable, if that helps xD). I know that an open ending can be a bit annoying though, sorry xDD. I haven't watched the movie, but that's a good idea for the ending! Except because the new king/president would be suddenly 20 years younger, but well, they manage genetics pretty good, who knows lol. And thank you again! I appreciate the feedback a lot ^^ <3

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tomatomc July 12 2015, 16:25:32 UTC
oh wow i haven't read a fic this good in a long time. the ending got me fucked tbh. everything was good especially luhan's characterization omg it was a+ good job omg.

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berryboys July 15 2015, 00:25:49 UTC
;; that's so nice of you, thank you! Haha Luhan was an asshole sometimes, but that made him both fun and frustrating to write, though I ended liking him even being extremely classist xD

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Great story anonymous July 20 2015, 16:34:31 UTC
I really love your story. I wish you would continue it! It is one of the best xiuhan stories I have read. Your writing is really good. Please continue if you can.

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Re: Great story berryboys July 22 2015, 12:36:25 UTC
Hi! Thank you so much for thinking that! It's such a huge compliment to hear something like that <3. This is the whole fic though, there is no planned sequel so far, so I'm sorry!

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