Wow. That ending had my jaw dropping. It took me a few seconds to recover. This is sooo good. I wish it was longer cause I wanted to know more. Great work!
Thank you ^^ Hehe nice to get some jaw dropping with my silly ideas lol. I wish I had had more time to develop it, and even going beyond that open ending but...!
holy mother of god that was great. I still can't believe I read this in so little time. It seemed like so much but it was only 29k. Normally stories with such a big idea (not to say this was small I just mean in terms of a book like plot) and have a smaller amount don't satisfy me. But this. This. Was great. It was absolutely fantastic! Blew me away!!
Heh, it's a relief it was satisfying. Honestly, I think I could have develop it much more, but at some point I was /done/ with the fic, so it stayed this way (throwing shit at myself right now lol). So thank you!! Now it's me who is satisfied after your comment ^^
Oh my god this is amazing esp. The end THE END GOT ME SO HARD I SAT DOWN ON MY BED FOR A MOMENT WITH AN OPEN MOUTH fyi not every writing does that to me I loved Luhan AND Minseok's characterisation they were so real and character development was so fluid and natural everything was awesome I'd never seen a Jongin & Baekhyun fic but it also fit really well you had me cursing and screaming at a story in the middle of the night because Luhan fleed after their river sex I was so in shock but then when he come back I was so so happy THIS FIC GOT ME TOO HARD I'LL NEED TIME TO ADJUST AND RETURN TO NORMAL AGAIN THIS IS SICK. SUCH AN AMAZING FIC, I BOW TO YOU /bows/
Give me a moment while I collect my tears, because this comment ;;;;;; it's great that it made you feel that way, because open endings like this sometimes are bound to be a failure, or to leave people bitter. And characterization means a lot to me so thank you!! ^^ (Oh no kaibaek fics? Do you want me to fix that? xDD) Luhan was so dumb to do that, though he was actually looking for an excuse to go back to check his brother. Way to make people panic hehe. Thank you again for such a nice comment <33
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(Oh no kaibaek fics? Do you want me to fix that? xDD) Luhan was so dumb to do that, though he was actually looking for an excuse to go back to check his brother. Way to make people panic hehe. Thank you again for such a nice comment <33
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