I didn't read the pairings tag when I started this story, so when I came across Jongin/Baekhyun in the fic (and I will later elaborate on their beautiful relationship) and I shook my fist at the universe and realized I should have seen it coming miles away. You're reading berry's fic. Ofc there's a high chance of KaiBaek!
The summary was the first thing to get to me. Me: Oh yeassss Luhan ge at the top of this world is exactly what I live for hur hur hur hur. The title was the second thing, though it caught me in a really unexpected way. It sounds chirpy and fun. I can picture hair flipping and flashing V signs, and cute winking while thinking No surprise to me! You're classless clever and free!!
But once I started the fic ... what have you DONE ....I liked Luhan thoughts. His thoughts aligned with the way he was brought up. It's a little unexpected in fics where the protagonist is the protagonist BECAUSE he dares to think differently. Surprisingly, it was Luhan's friend
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Giiirl your comment is so long that it could be a fic itself lol Thank you, let me smooch you. I'm glad you didn't read the pairings! Warnings + pairing can spoil a lot of things of a fic, it's almost better reading it without too much information. But you're right, I sneak kaibaek into anything I'm allowed to xD
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lmao. i think sometimes my comments challenge the length of the fic itself :| I need to work on this. Channel my 12370243 words into a few select, proper and eloquent words u_u
About Luhan: what I felt was, that in most fics even students of a certain study, or medicine, usually handle situations like pros. But Luhan was ... blank. I'd agree with your resources bit though xD Nonetheless, his reaction made him more real because not everyone can handle it. And then when he was test-ish feeding Jongdae medicine and waiting to see its effect :s
I will 100000% agree on your thoughts regarding Byun because that child is light itself and that's the only reason the sun graces us lol i'm going to trash level 200 orz someone save me
Don't be sorry! You're not alone xD Nope, Baek doesn't have to die. This is a family dictatorship, so the power passes from parents to children. The thing is, Baekhyun is still preparing the revolution, and he knows he will have opposition. He means to hide the baby - his clone - so that there's no chance for them to pass the power to the clone, so that people can't simply get rid of Baekhyun and replace him with the new baby. But it's an open ending, the revolution may fail and he may die anyways, so... I hope this is what you were asking about?? xD
THIS MADE MY DAY LMFAO. Thank you so much for liking it! <3 Really, since I have gone through a lot of insecurities with this fic (and thought about not posting it), it means a lot when people enjoy it. Jongin and Baekhyun are my favs here, so I'm glad you liked Baekhyun! I think they are actually the most interesting characters (or it's my inner shipper talking lol), but writing Xiuhan from 'hating' stage to lovers was such an interesting (and painful) ride... O_O You have a great day too ^^ And a thousand of thank yous!
sorry for the late reply OTL I'm so sorry! I'm so happy you liked this fic too! Don't pry too much in case you end finding something you don't like haha Of course Kaibaek was going to be together xDDD Unless the prompter tells me not to put kaibaek in the fic, or they're alreadyasking for a specific Jongin or Baekhyun's pairing... I can't help it. And it really means a lot that you found it interesting, because I have a very low steem when it comes to this fic in general, and at some point I didn't enjoy it as much as I should have while writing it. But comments like this one make my day (in fact I have read it more than once throughout the month lmao), so thank you x10000. You know you leave great comments <3
What the actual fck. O.O I did not expect that. I mean based on that title I was expecting something very funny and light. I try to avoid reading warnings and summaries and holy crap was I taken by surprise. This is amaaaaziiinggg. Idk what positive superlative words to use because wow this is crazy. Just know that if I was in my laptop it'd be keysmash everywhere. Haha. I know I'm not making any sense but you made me lie still with my mouth open and eyes wide after finishing this.
I did not expect KaiBaek here and I think this is the first time I read a fanfic with this pairing. But you're this close to making me go search for some fics with them. Haha. I came here for XiuHan and I wasn't disappointed. Their progress is so realistic that it made the pain 10000x worse. I totally don't regret staying up late to finish this. Thank you for this! I just hoped I found it sooner. Lol.
You're right about the title being confusing LMAO. It's kind of quirky. But I'm glad you weren't taken aback after all that violence (?), and I also think that the best way to enjoy a fic is without reading the warnings at least, so yay for that decision! Thank you for your words, you don't need superlative words to get my face all red <33
Hahaha there's kaibaek here because they're my #1 OTP, so I'm flattered you felt like searching more fics about them! And sorry for the pain in xiuhan, I surely discharged my otp frustrations on them xDDD. Thank you again for commenting, and I'm sorry I took so long to answer! You were really nice and deserved to be answered sooner :(
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The summary was the first thing to get to me.
Me: Oh yeassss Luhan ge at the top of this world is exactly what I live for hur hur hur hur.
The title was the second thing, though it caught me in a really unexpected way. It sounds chirpy and fun. I can picture hair flipping and flashing V signs, and cute winking while thinking No surprise to me! You're classless clever and free!!
But once I started the fic ... what have you DONE ....I liked Luhan thoughts. His thoughts aligned with the way he was brought up. It's a little unexpected in fics where the protagonist is the protagonist BECAUSE he dares to think differently. Surprisingly, it was Luhan's friend ( ... )
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About Luhan: what I felt was, that in most fics even students of a certain study, or medicine, usually handle situations like pros. But Luhan was ... blank. I'd agree with your resources bit though xD
Nonetheless, his reaction made him more real because not everyone can handle it. And then when he was test-ish feeding Jongdae medicine and waiting to see its effect :s
I will 100000% agree on your thoughts regarding Byun because that child is light itself and that's the only reason the sun graces us lol
i'm going to trash level 200 orz
someone save me
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Does Baek have to die?
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Nope, Baek doesn't have to die. This is a family dictatorship, so the power passes from parents to children. The thing is, Baekhyun is still preparing the revolution, and he knows he will have opposition. He means to hide the baby - his clone - so that there's no chance for them to pass the power to the clone, so that people can't simply get rid of Baekhyun and replace him with the new baby. But it's an open ending, the revolution may fail and he may die anyways, so... I hope this is what you were asking about?? xD
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You have a great day too ^^ And a thousand of thank yous!
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I'm so happy you liked this fic too! Don't pry too much in case you end finding something you don't like haha
Of course Kaibaek was going to be together xDDD Unless the prompter tells me not to put kaibaek in the fic, or they're alreadyasking for a specific Jongin or Baekhyun's pairing... I can't help it.
And it really means a lot that you found it interesting, because I have a very low steem when it comes to this fic in general, and at some point I didn't enjoy it as much as I should have while writing it. But comments like this one make my day (in fact I have read it more than once throughout the month lmao), so thank you x10000. You know you leave great comments <3
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I did not expect KaiBaek here and I think this is the first time I read a fanfic with this pairing. But you're this close to making me go search for some fics with them. Haha. I came here for XiuHan and I wasn't disappointed. Their progress is so realistic that it made the pain 10000x worse. I totally don't regret staying up late to finish this. Thank you for this! I just hoped I found it sooner. Lol.
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Hahaha there's kaibaek here because they're my #1 OTP, so I'm flattered you felt like searching more fics about them! And sorry for the pain in xiuhan, I surely discharged my otp frustrations on them xDDD.
Thank you again for commenting, and I'm sorry I took so long to answer! You were really nice and deserved to be answered sooner :(
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