Comments | berryboys: (No surprise to me) You're classless, clever and free (3/3)

berryboys

(No surprise to me) You're classless, clever and free (3/3)

Jul 09, 2015 15:48

( Part 3 )

Comments 42

caterplina October 28 2015, 16:25:50 UTC

THIS WAS AMAZING!!!
i love dystopian stories and i've read one too many. But this one was worth the shot. everything you created for this world was perfect. You set the story very well.
And their relationships! !! ugh!!! so good!! i loved everything, how the fell for each other, baekai's story, the sibling's relationship.
Another fic to add to the favorites list hehehe

berryboys December 2 2015, 22:32:42 UTC

Thank you!! :D I'm a big fan of dystopian stories too, so I really wanted to write some fic about them at some point. I'm happy to read you think it was well done ;;;; I was afraid that it was too slow or too fast, and the usual stuff haha. And sorry for not replying sooner D:

caterplina December 4 2015, 00:33:06 UTC

omg i've just checked out your livejournal
you also wrote aerodynamic, coming of age and twice twenty!!
senpai
i love your stories :) I'm a big fan of chankai and twice twenty is of my faves of that ship. And i've recently discovered my love for xiukai *heart eyes* aerodynamic was great (another perfectly set story)

THAT ENDING u_haruka December 15 2015, 02:27:29 UTC

OH MY HOLY GOOOOOOD!!!!! I loved it, everything was so great but now I'm dying of curiosity bc I don't know how everything would have ended (　ﾟдﾟ)

RE: THAT ENDING berryboys January 21 2016, 20:50:24 UTC

Thank you! Bad... it would have ended really bad... JUST JOKING LOL. But it might have, or it might have not... depends what character you ask (oh god, stop me).

RE: THAT ENDING u_haruka January 22 2016, 20:48:06 UTC

EVERYONE!!! You're so meaaaaaan!!!! >< how could youu??!! Uuuuugh really!!!!

saladedefruits December 31 2015, 12:09:19 UTC

NOOOOOO! HOW CAN YOU END THIS LIKE THIS? OTL

This gave me Hunger Games feels though, in the way that no one really win in then end/ the victory is bitter.
I loved the Xiuhan relationship in this. I was kind of expecting a Suyeol moment (Idk why?!) but I guess it would have been too distracting drom the plot.
It was definitely too short haha

berryboys January 21 2016, 20:54:30 UTC

I ended it like this because I was short in time! :D And also (not going to lie) because I was soo done lmao. You're right about how no one wins in this, at least not when the fic ends, but political things usually move slowly. A suyeol moment!! HAHAHA Where did that come from? (right now I can't even remember who Chanyeol was, I'm terrible).
Thank you for reading and commenting <3

ordinary_days01 February 1 2016, 05:25:13 UTC

you've put this out months ago (well last year) and it's almost 12:30am and i have school tomorrow but oh gosh i just had to comment

like, wow, i seriously have no words. the idea, the whole universe of this fic was incredible. the characters were great (LOVED minseok and baekhyun), xiuhan and kaibaek were A+++ and gahhhhhhh I LOVED IT!!

but what i really wanted to say was PLOT TWIST OF THE FUCKING CENTURY OH LORD THE LAST LINE GOT ME SO GOOD

berryboys April 9 2017, 16:17:40 UTC

hi! thank you so much for your comment! ^^ I'm glad you found the universe interesting because I had wanted to write something like this for a long time, since I love sci fi and dystopia :) Also thank you for liking the plot twist! I know some people didn't hahaha

holy shit cam_yeol March 1 2016, 05:00:40 UTC

That was one of the most amazing things I've read. I hope I write something as moving as this one day holy cow. i feel like crying after reading, i mean there's just so much development of Luhan, and all the characters have such realistic reactions and backstories... wow... just wow.. please keep writing, I'll be your fan for sure

RE: holy shit berryboys April 9 2017, 17:36:11 UTC

wow thank you!! It wasn't my intention to make anyone feel like crying hahaha, but I'm so happy you found the fic good enough <33