This fic was amazing!! I was SO emotionally invested in this fic tbh, and once I realized who it was that was marking Minseok with his scent (I probably realized this waaay late, but whatever) and what would inevitably happen with Yifan and the other pack I was actually a little bit upset but I couldn't stop reading. Xiukai is hardly one of my favorite pairings but you wrote them in such a way that had me adoring their interactions and the dynamic you created for them. I wish I could leave a better comment because you absolutely deserve it. This fic had everything that a great story should have: good pacing, excellent characterization, and conflicts that were dealt with and ended in a way that makes sense. (And I'll never say no to a happy, or at least hopeful ending hehe.)
I'm sorry this comment probably makes no sense but this fic was just!!!!! amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Thank you so much for such a beautiful comment! ^^ Well I want to think that Baekhyun's real identity (???) wasn't that obvious, except for that moment during Jongin's heat that he feels a wave of hate towards him. I'm sorry it upseted you! The angst sometimes gets out of my hands lol. I recognize it was hard even for me to write xiukai in this situation (and they're my second otp), so I'm happy you could appreciate them. Hehe I will never say no to a happy ending either, but just because I have been too much of a coward so far to write a completely sad/angst ending (I CAN'T KILL EXO MEMBERS OR SOMETHING SIMILAR AND STAY IN PEACE). Someday. Someday.
omg i haven't read a fic as good as this one in a very long time, and i love how you incorporated the wolf au throughout this entire story but it was never overbearing. i loved all the characterization you did for everyone, especially kris and kyungsoo. they were quite possibly my favorites and i hope they have a happy ending. the dynamics between minseok and jongin were interesting to read and i'm definitely going to have to read this again just in case i missed anything. i also loved chanyeol's advice to jongin at the beginning, it showed that first and foremost he cared about his friend. i'm glad i stayed up to read this and i'm definitely reading all your other fics.
/cries on you/ Thank you for reading and commenting!! I was afraid that abo au+military au+ wolf au would be overwhelming and I tried to be careful with it, so I'm glad to know that it wasn't. Kyungsoo is my fav character here too lol (or is he always my favorite character in every fic?? mmmh my favorite person in life? mmmh), and you can be sure that he wouldn't be eaten by another pack in any of the possible versions! xD If you reread maybe you will find Minseok being a bit of an asshole? He and his doubtful self can give that impression. And about Chanyeol! Well, to begin with, he's indeed in love with Jongin, but unlike Baekhyun, he reacts by worrying about him instead of sabotaging the relationship; so they are friends, yes, but he cares about Jongin more than usual for other reasons too (^o^). And I hope you enjoy the other fics, though... I think this is the best I've written, or at least the one I enjoyed the most - this could be a totally biased perception. Thank you thank you!
ahhh yeah minseok did come off as a bit of an asshole, but he had his vulnerable moments too which balanced it out a bit for me aha. and yeah, i got that impression about chanyeol ; u ;
and omg yes i've enjoyed everything i've read from you so far and i can't believe i didn't remember you were the author of twice twenty !!! i read that a while ago when i was going through a hp au kick lol and i loved it
Gooood, that was what I was trying to transmit, but I didn't know if it had worked haha (I would have kicked myself if Minseok looked like an absolute asshole). Oh... twice twenty... that was such a pain to write because I had no idea of how chankai was as a pairing. Not that I know better now lmao
read all of this in one go curled up in my bed ignoring real life... i haven't sat down and read a fic in literally months i'm so glad this is the one i chose to curl up with "if a writer isn't crying, the reader isn't crying. if a writer isn't feeling, the reader isn't feeling." -- or something like that
"if a writer isn't crying, the reader isn't crying. if a writer isn't feeling, the reader isn't feeling." Oh I hope people didn't suffer as much as I did while writing this lmfao, because specially in some angst scenes I was a mess. 'Why am I like this if I know what's going to happen' didn't work. I'm happy to hear you chose this to read when you weren't reading fics! I feel honored xD (also, you went to choose a long ass one haha). And thank you so much for your nice words!
it's so true though! as sadistic as it sounds, any emotion you feel by writing should be transferred into the readers... hate, love, sadness, anger-- it's what draws them in and gets them hooked. instead of putting words in people's mouths, you're putting feels in people's hearts. it's a great talent to have =w= anyway, this fic is going into my faves! i'll look out for more from you in the future <3
Aah I agree with you ~ It's just that it's easy to fail at transmitting emotions, though I feel like I can only release feelings while writing (if that makes sense) xD What beautiful, nice things you say to me though! lol
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I'm sorry this comment probably makes no sense but this fic was just!!!!! amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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omg i haven't read a fic as good as this one in a very long time, and i love how you incorporated the wolf au throughout this entire story but it was never overbearing. i loved all the characterization you did for everyone, especially kris and kyungsoo. they were quite possibly my favorites and i hope they have a happy ending. the dynamics between minseok and jongin were interesting to read and i'm definitely going to have to read this again just in case i missed anything. i also loved chanyeol's advice to jongin at the beginning, it showed that first and foremost he cared about his friend. i'm glad i stayed up to read this and i'm definitely reading all your other fics.
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I was afraid that abo au+military au+ wolf au would be overwhelming and I tried to be careful with it, so I'm glad to know that it wasn't. Kyungsoo is my fav character here too lol (or is he always my favorite character in every fic?? mmmh my favorite person in life? mmmh), and you can be sure that he wouldn't be eaten by another pack in any of the possible versions! xD If you reread maybe you will find Minseok being a bit of an asshole? He and his doubtful self can give that impression. And about Chanyeol! Well, to begin with, he's indeed in love with Jongin, but unlike Baekhyun, he reacts by worrying about him instead of sabotaging the relationship; so they are friends, yes, but he cares about Jongin more than usual for other reasons too (^o^).
And I hope you enjoy the other fics, though... I think this is the best I've written, or at least the one I enjoyed the most - this could be a totally biased perception. Thank you thank you!
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and omg yes i've enjoyed everything i've read from you so far and i can't believe i didn't remember you were the author of twice twenty !!! i read that a while ago when i was going through a hp au kick lol and i loved it
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i haven't sat down and read a fic in literally months
i'm so glad this is the one i chose to curl up with
"if a writer isn't crying,
the reader isn't crying.
if a writer isn't feeling,
the reader isn't feeling."
-- or something like that
i feel good and fuzzy
thank you <3
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the reader isn't crying.
if a writer isn't feeling,
the reader isn't feeling."
Oh I hope people didn't suffer as much as I did while writing this lmfao, because specially in some angst scenes I was a mess. 'Why am I like this if I know what's going to happen' didn't work.
I'm happy to hear you chose this to read when you weren't reading fics! I feel honored xD (also, you went to choose a long ass one haha). And thank you so much for your nice words!
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anyway, this fic is going into my faves! i'll look out for more from you in the future <3
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What beautiful, nice things you say to me though! lol
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