Comments | berusama: fic: Maybe We'll Look Back and Laugh (K/S)

berusama

fic: Maybe We'll Look Back and Laugh (K/S)

Jul 16, 2009 21:50

Title: Maybe We'll Look Back and Laugh
Rating: PG
Pairing: Kirk/Spock
Warnings/Spoilers: none/parts of ST XI
Disclaimer: I don't own Star Trek or the characters portrayed herein
Summary: Jim and Spock wake up as nine-year-olds. Antics ensue.

( some day this was going to make one hell of a story... )

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berusama September 19 2009, 04:16:54 UTC

thank you for commenting; i'm so glad you liked it!♥!

solfastir September 16 2009, 22:46:02 UTC

Baw. This was unbelievably cute. D: Love love loveeee ♥~

berusama September 19 2009, 04:17:36 UTC

♥!! thank you :D

angelofcaffeine September 16 2009, 23:04:36 UTC

This is epic.

Seriously, the nine-year-old versions were so spot on it's ridiculous. I loved the relationship between Spock and Kirk being explored as brand new, one unknowing, and then an old friendship again. The dynamics are very interesting, not to mention the writing. It's so smooth, and I really feel for the characters.

I'm deeply impressed. Thank you so much for sharing this. <3

berusama September 19 2009, 04:20:13 UTC

thank you so much for this comment! it's always nice to know when one's character depictions are well-received :D i'm so very glad you liked it!♥!

rae1013 September 16 2009, 23:33:15 UTC

"Jim," Spock whispered after a few steps, tugging against Jim's handful. "I am capable of following on my own."

"I know," Jim said back, but didn't let go. Instead he briefly considered humming his own secret agent theme music as he hugged the wall and glanced around a corner.

I laughed so hard at this. I can totally see Jim doing that.

"Jim," came Spock's voice from down the hall. Jim turned, saw Spock approaching and thought, 'fuck that.'

He met Spock half-way, wrapped an arm around his neck and kissed his First Officer for all he was worth. Spock's hands came up to rest on his hips almost immediately and Jim sighed, smiled, and pressed closer.

This was awesome. That Spock, of all people, refused to let the moment go and followed Jim out into the hall was absolute perfection.

I loved this whole story. The premise, the hilarity and emotion and the resolution. Guh!

berusama September 19 2009, 04:22:57 UTC

\o/ thank you, thank you, thank you!!

angels3 September 16 2009, 23:39:10 UTC

I absolutely adore fics where they are turned into kids.

Loved the ending.

berusama September 19 2009, 04:24:08 UTC

me too! there's no such thing as too many de-aged fics, imo :D