fic: What Makes You Beautiful (Up All Night, Ziam Edition)

[berusama]

Title: Baby, You Light Up My World
Pairing: Ziam
Rating: R
Warning(s): beard!Danielle
Disclaimer: I cannot and do not own/know/associate with/stalk the real people mentioned herein. The following is a work of fiction. No money was made in its creation.
Summary: Zayn doesn't know he's beautiful fucking hot.
AN: beta'd by ingeneva, who i am now in love with. any

Comments

[urgencytobleed]

I really, really enjoyed this. It was sweet, hot, romantic, everything I want in a fic like this. Excellent job! <3

[berusama]

i'm so glad you enjoyed this! thank you so much for taking the time to comment!♥!

[nostravario]

This was so great ^^ The dialogue was so in character and the way they moved...damn, that was hot! I just adored this fic so much, their easy friendship, the banter, how much they trust each other. Favorite part was this though - "What? No," Zayn protests, promptly following Liam out of the studio. "I'm coming back," Liam laughs, but Zayn ignores him and together they walk through the hotel to the lounge. - that was sooo cute ^^ This is definitely going in my bookmarks and now I'm going to go watch Zayn hipthrusting xD

[berusama]

i'm so happy you thought their dialogue was in character; that's really what i cared about when writing this :D and thank you so much for commenting!♥! hip-thrusting!zayn is really all one needs in life.

[iheartvmars07]

d'awww. cute & sexy!
I love me a dancing centered fic!
good job!

[berusama]

lol, thank you so much! 'cute & sexy' was exactly what i was going for :D

[sumaku13]

I loved this story - It had a good plot backdrop which transitioned into the intense interaction between Liam and Zayn through dancing; hot, passionate, yearning, daring and overall just stunning

[berusama]

wow, i can't even begin to tell you how much this comment means to me. i don't write just to get people to comment on my stuff, but when someone does leaves one as detailed as this, it's just such a big bonus :) i feel like you picked up on everything i was trying to do with this story, both with its structuring and the content... just, thank you so much for taking the time to leave this comment! i really appreciate it!♥!

[anonymous]

Wow. This was so hot. This is exactly how I picture Zayn and Liam when they're together, and you described it very well.
Lol, haha the funny thing is, I was listening take you down by chris brown, and then I found this, so I started reading, and THAT SONG with THIS STORY.. PERFECT! XD

[berusama]

yes, omg, yes, that song goes with story like they were made for each other! i'm glad you liked it; thank you for commenting :D