Fic for Star54kar

Dec 23, 2009 22:39

For: Star54kar
From: solstice-muse
Title: Self Storage
Rating: PG13
Summary: Pride comes before a fall, so does a big secret, several lies and some days of the week socks.
Disclaimer: I am not Stephanie Meyer, therefore there are characters and a plot in the following story.
Warnings: Introspective Ron, no smut, first person.
Author's Note: For my wonderful friend, Kara ( Read more... )

fic, star54kar

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maevemist December 24 2009, 04:50:52 UTC
Oh oh oh Ron. That last line melted me *is Puddle*

I really enjoyed this. I liked the first person and the way it flowed. Not having anyreal scene breaks is such an effective way of showing how lost and confused and miserably unaccomplished Ron really feels. Each day so very much like the last with no real high points.

I love that Harry and Charlie were constantly there for him and That Hermione was with Percy.

I doubt I am making any sense at all at this point but my point is I like this story very much.

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solstice_muse December 28 2009, 23:26:38 UTC
I really did try to do it without breaks, I always do breaks in my fics, and it's surprisingly difficult!

I'm glad you liked it.

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ozma_katiebell December 24 2009, 16:32:13 UTC
Oh, wonderful!!

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solstice_muse December 28 2009, 23:27:06 UTC
Thank you!

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rickey_a December 24 2009, 18:25:45 UTC
*\o/* this was so much fun. Ron's brain is a frightening force to be reckoned with. Just a great POV and loads of family & fun. I had to look up gusset in the dictionary. :) learn something new everyday.

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solstice_muse December 28 2009, 23:27:50 UTC
It did tickle me that I had you looking up the word gusset *lol*

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solstice_muse December 28 2009, 23:29:00 UTC
Not my line unfortunately, it was from the radio show I got the idea from, but it seemed to be so very George.

Glad you liked it!

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hpuckle December 25 2009, 02:41:39 UTC
Oh, Ron. Such a funny, brilliant - strange - Ron! ♥

xxx

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solstice_muse December 28 2009, 23:29:29 UTC
Cheers me dear!

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