An Odd Taste of Nostalgia

Mar 01, 2013 16:03

Title: An Odd Taste of Nostalgia
Pairing: JongKey
Genre: Smut, romance, au
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 3,500
Summary: This isn't usually what kids do in a homemade tent, is it?

“Aish, I think you gave me carpet burn,” complains Key in sudden realization, rubbing at his back. )

jongkey, oneshot

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kim_play96 March 2 2013, 01:05:37 UTC
omg! U r back!!! SPOT!!! Brb :D

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sakay March 2 2013, 03:59:52 UTC
OTL MY BODY NEEDS TO RECOVER FROM THIS.

I was gonna spot but then I realized that would make no sense. XD Emma baby that was ALL OF THE YES GOOD. You should definitely feel more confident in your smut abilities because my ovaries are broken right now. /huehuehue

I am so glad to see you posting this besides your discomfort for it - I feel strangely proud of you. XD

Well I sound like an old grandma now, so I should stop with this stupid long comment. XD

AND POST THE REST OF YOUR SMUT IT DESERVES TO LIIIIIIIIVE!

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bestplace March 2 2013, 21:44:38 UTC
sobs i'm so glad you liked it bb TTuTT

omg XD I'm happy you feel proud; i was so worried, but having all of my older friends on here encourage me is making me a little more self-assured XD

hehehehehe, ily ahjumma~ ♥

maybe i'll let it live. MAYBE. there's a lot of it dear god. though it's all unfinished but yeah whatever

thank you so much for reading bb. TwT

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janegreen93 March 2 2013, 05:10:47 UTC
officially starting a petition for you to post all the smut, all the smut forever plz

seriously this was so good, it has all the elements of a good smut fic (including implied top!key oh yes thank you) and yet it was really honest and I think it really showed what making love is really like between people who have been in a relationship for awhile. all of the banter between them in the heat of it all was hilarious and so realistic that it just made this exchange so so believable.

you did not fail at all, really, I loved it so so much

(shameless re-mention of how you should really post all that smut you've written YOUR COMMUNITY NEEDS YOU)

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bestplace March 2 2013, 21:48:11 UTC
omg maybe i should once i finish it and stuff OTL

hahaha top!key is my favorite key! i contemplated making this keyhyun, but decided just to imply it because it flowed a little better that way. i was going for that--the fact that this was more love-making than just sex in a tent OTL /sentimental

i'm so happy you think it was realistic omg ;w; that's what i was going for, i'm glad i didn't fail!

GURL YOU'RE MAKING ME CONTEMPLATE IT BUT IDK IF THAT'S A GOOD THING. ;;

thanks so much for the lovely comment, i really appreciate it. c':

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moshixd March 2 2013, 05:12:19 UTC
I never thought I would read a smut with your write style
But God, I'm glad you posted it. It's awesome ♥
you don't need to be embarassed, you did a really good work!
hope you can upload more fics soon ;)

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bestplace March 2 2013, 21:49:20 UTC
so happy you think it's good! i'm relived ;;

i'll try to upload more soon, i'm working on a bunch, so ^^

thanks so much for reading and commenting. ;w; ♥

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kpopforlife March 2 2013, 06:07:36 UTC
This is just perfection. Their endless not sexy banter makes me all kinds of happy.

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bestplace March 2 2013, 21:49:49 UTC
i'm so glad you liked it!! c':

thanks so much for reading. ^^ ♥

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