An Odd Taste of Nostalgia

Mar 01, 2013 16:03

Title: An Odd Taste of Nostalgia
Pairing: JongKey
Genre: Smut, romance, au
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 3,500
Summary: This isn't usually what kids do in a homemade tent, is it?

“Aish, I think you gave me carpet burn,” complains Key in sudden realization, rubbing at his back. )

jongkey, oneshot

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lovezrainydayz March 2 2013, 12:32:48 UTC
Confidence boost! I've come to praise you up for this ridiculously awesome smut. ;)
You're one of my favorite authors, so I'm probably a bit biased, but this was honestly really great! It was so cute with the nostalgia and romantic and still very sexy all in one really great read. I'm glad you're back!
The characters were just perfect. And it was all very realistic, so of course that's great. It seems effortless for you great authors to write your characters. I'm quite envious.
Sorry for my excessive use of 'great'. It just seemed to fit everywhere. :P
But congratulations on your first full-blown smut, Emma. It really did deserve the light of day. ^^
The fact that I'm also a bit JongKey biased as well is irrelevant here. I'll read anything you guys decide to share. :)

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bestplace March 2 2013, 21:51:34 UTC
ahhhh you make me feel so relived, you know that?? TTuTT

awwhh i'm so touched to hear that. ;w; thank you really, i appreciate that so much. <3

your comment makes me so happy and a lot more comfortable with the story, so thank you. c': so glad you could take the time to read. ♥

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k_pop4life March 2 2013, 20:47:41 UTC
HOLY FUCK THIS IS GREAT! YOU SHOULD POST ALL THE SMUT THAT IS SAVED ON YOUR COMPUTER WHY WON'T YOU LET US READ IT! OH WHAT A CRUEL THING TO DO ( ... )

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bestplace March 2 2013, 21:54:16 UTC
OH MY GOD ALL OF THE CAPS IS MAKING ME FEEL LIKE I DID SOMETHING RIGHT NFKDFJGKHGN

I do feel like this is something they would do, i'm glad you feel that way, too! only they would have sex in a tent OTL

YESSS jongkey is the most versatile couple in the world okay, don't get me started. PEOPLE NEED TO UNDERSTAND THAT. /huff

wahhh yes, the romantic parts. /blush. i'm glad you liked them. <3

oh lord you're just too much ;////; thank you so very much, your comment is perfection. TwT thanks for reading! ♥

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hautekeyture March 3 2013, 07:17:12 UTC
OH GOD OH DEAR GOD I WANNA SCREAM AND SHOUT AND LET IT ALL OUT THIS WAS AMAZING. EXCUSE ME WHILE I GO SIT IN THE CORNER AND FAN MYSELF FOR A WHILE BECAUSE FHDLIOHFIJKSDHFDSHFJKDHSJFHDJFHDSJK THIS WAS SO FUCKING HOT YOU CAN'T EVEN BELIEVE.

i knew you were full of shit when you said you couldn't write smut I KNEW IT BECAUSE EVERYTHING YOU WRITE IS GOOD. EV.ER.Y.THING.

i'm going to refrain from quoting because i would literally be quoting the whole thing but i just loved the intimate conversation throughout this. it felt totally natural and loving and warm and so very jongkey - like if they were to be having sex making love in a blanket fort irl this is how they would be doing it. the guitar playing and serenading and key being a fatass it was all perfect.

oh and i'm going to be really real for a sec, i love and adore any and all versions of this - “Jonghyun, come for me,” he begs, voice gruff, deep. Jonghyun’s hips pick up the pace. “Just-dear god-come for me, baby.” - and heads buried in necks/shoulders in smutfic and holy shit y9u ( ... )

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bestplace March 3 2013, 20:35:57 UTC
SOBS I WAS WONDERING IF YOU WERE GONNA READ THIS AND I GOT REALLY NERVOUS THINKING ABOUT IT AND WHEN I SAW YOU COMMENTED I QUITE LITERALLY EXPLODED OMG THE JONGKEY SMUT QUEEN IS COMMENTING ON MY FIRST POSTED SMUT OMGOMGOMG FGMFKGJNFH

//WHATEVER// GURL. YOU'RE THE ONE WHO IS GOOD AT WRITING EVERYTHING I DON'T CARE WHAT YOU SAY.

KEY BEING A FATASS LMAO. yes. i tried to make them very /them/ but didn't know if i succeeded...thank you for approving. \o/

ohhhh i love that stuff too. ouo fnghgkfng water u saying i don't even have an alter okay stawp that /blush

FUCK NO YOU'RE NOT, PICK UP THAT TOWEL GODDAMN YOU! YOU WILL ALWAYS BE THE BEST AT WRITING SMUT TO ME AND THAT WILL NEVER CHANGE, YOU HEAR ME???? NEVER STOP.

sobs no. thank you. ;w; you make me feel too special for words. I JUST ADORE YOU WITH ALL OF MY HEART, OKAY??? okay. ^^

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elysionew March 4 2013, 06:21:13 UTC
ahh! emma.
this was really cute ;~;
I can't even bring myself to analyze it but I love how Jonghyun was in this. He is such a sweet derp in general and I think you really picked up on it here. ;; so cute.

Wonderful job C:

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acng1993 August 30 2013, 04:19:39 UTC
This was really cute smut. I don't enjoy a lot of smut because I feel like there isn't much plot or character insight at all, but I really enjoyed this oneshot! I love the fort idea and how much dialogue you included :) (I just made a fort yesterday with my siblings actually...lol. )

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