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Painful Silence

Jul 30, 2008 21:51

Title : Painful Silence
Chapter: 2/5
Author : betelin_notecor
Chapter Rating : G
Overall Rating: PG-13
Word Count : ~5, 300
Characters : Albus/Scorpius, Rose
Disclaimer : Just playing... I'll give them back to JKR when I'm done!

Summary : Al's always been a bit shy, but he's never been afraid to talk to people. That is, he wasn't until Scorpius showed up. Now Al wonders ( Read more... )

rating: pg-13, ship: albus severus/scorpius, character: albus severus, series: painful silence, fanfiction: chaptered, character: scorpius, fanfiction: complete

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betelin_notecor July 31 2008, 02:36:51 UTC

I like to think he wouldn't mind because it means people will stop being mean to him. So even though it was crazy embarrassing, it was a good thing. :)

And Scorp adores his best mate. Perhaps a bit more than a friend should. ;)

Now, go write! I want to read your fic someday, and it has to exist for that to happen! XD

p01s0n3d July 31 2008, 04:30:18 UTC

Awesome as usual. I find a bit ironic that a psyc story appears in my life the day I spend all afternoon reading my psyc textbook ('cause I'm such a nerd ( ... )

betelin_notecor July 31 2008, 13:57:22 UTC

lol, that is ironic.

Binns would be the oldest, but he's a ghost and I cannot see them allowing a ghost to take the position because there would be no reason for a ghost to ever give it up.

And I tried to show not everyone would be accepting. His family, many of the people he's interacted with, and Scorpius, his sole friend, would be understanding, but other's not so much. Thus I used Bole to show how people could still be mean to Al.

And don't worry. I ramble too. XD

brent360 July 31 2008, 04:39:06 UTC

J'ADORE!

Clever plot twist with the mental disorder! And I SO figured out who the other boy was that the Healer treated...

*knowing smug smile*

betelin_notecor July 31 2008, 13:58:30 UTC

Yay! I'm glad you liked the twist! But lol, the other boy is insignificant, I don't even know who he is myself.

brent360 August 1 2008, 07:35:21 UTC

*raises eyebrow*

ORLY? Well, I'm sticking to mah guns... Can't wait to see more delicious tentative ASS interaction. I seriously get the warm fuzzies with those notes!

jem46 July 31 2008, 04:49:07 UTC

Def glad to see this updated. =)

betelin_notecor July 31 2008, 13:59:01 UTC

Yay!

Thanks for commenting! ♥

dorothy_in_oz July 31 2008, 08:57:44 UTC

I really like the predicament. My sister had the same problem being a child, so she wouldn't speak to anyone.

But this was good! I cannot wait to read the next installment - and if it's a whole month better for me, because I will go away on hols for almost a month!

betelin_notecor July 31 2008, 13:59:46 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it and I'm sorry about your sister. :(

But yay for the hiatus working for you! XD