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Painful Silence

Jul 30, 2008 21:51

Title : Painful Silence
Chapter: 2/5
Author : betelin_notecor
Chapter Rating : G
Overall Rating: PG-13
Word Count : ~5, 300
Characters : Albus/Scorpius, Rose
Disclaimer : Just playing... I'll give them back to JKR when I'm done!

Summary : Al's always been a bit shy, but he's never been afraid to talk to people. That is, he wasn't until Scorpius showed up. Now Al wonders ( Read more... )

rating: pg-13, ship: albus severus/scorpius, character: albus severus, series: painful silence, fanfiction: chaptered, character: scorpius, fanfiction: complete

Comments 23

slug_belcher July 31 2008, 15:23:27 UTC

Oh my gosh! I am absolutely in love with this story! Albus is so cute! Can't wait for the next chapter!

betelin_notecor July 31 2008, 19:43:37 UTC

Yay! Thank you so much! ♥

And I'm hoping to get the next chapter done soon, but I'm crazy busy right now. XD

boiwndr July 31 2008, 17:16:39 UTC

Aaaw.... Poor lil Albie :(
It's great he has such a good friend who supports him in need within score.

Hope chap 3 won't take 3 months! :D

betelin_notecor July 31 2008, 19:42:33 UTC

Yep! Score is a totally fabu friend! :)

And I hope so too... X(

pirateninjax August 10 2008, 03:46:10 UTC

i would have died of embarrassment with that huge announcement. she just doesn't have that little twinkle of compassion (or something) that mcgonagall had. lol

wonderfully cute and i can't wait for the next installment =)

betelin_notecor August 10 2008, 03:48:00 UTC

no, sinistra is staid and starchy. Poor Al.

Thank you! I'm hoping to get it up in a couple weeks. (I'm a bit blocked... =/)

pirateninjax August 10 2008, 04:03:29 UTC

perfect description! my mind was drawing a blank on how to portray what i was feeling when i read her. bleck. mcg rules! =D

and no rush ^^ great things take time XD

betelin_notecor August 10 2008, 07:23:07 UTC

Yep, McG does rule, but she didn't fit this canon unfortunately. XD

lol, I wouldn't call it great, but it will be passable at least.

Amazing anonymous August 19 2008, 20:35:21 UTC

Hei! Just wanted to say I think this story is amazing:) Hope you update soon.

Re: Amazing betelin_notecor August 19 2008, 22:31:04 UTC

Thank you! I hope to update by the end of the month. :)

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betelin_notecor August 25 2008, 21:36:24 UTC

I just stumbled across the Mutism thing in a magazine and I knew I had to write about it. It's odd, but a very intriguing disease.

Al was embarrassed, but he was mostly glad to know what was wrong with him and that he could finally let other people know.

I'd love for you to kick Bole's arse, but a wait for a couple of chapters. He actually has a role to play besides bastard! XD