Comments | betelin_notecor: Obsession

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Obsession

Oct 03, 2008 21:34

Obsession
rating: hard R, ~2,000 words, pairings mentioned: Scorpius/Lily, Scorpius/Rose, Scorpius/Albus, Scorpius/James, Molly/Lucy, Hugo/Louis
WARNINGS: incest, minor dub-con, major mind-fuck

Summary: Scorpius has an obsession.

A/N: OMG, I don't know where this came from. I totally blame snarkyscorp for this because it came out of her b-day prompts. Happy ( Read more... )

ship: james/scorpius, character: lily ii, ship: albus severus/scorpius, character: albus severus, rating: r, character: scorpius, character: hugo, character: molly ii, character: louis, character: lucy, fanfiction: one-shot, character: rose, character: james ii

Comments 74

aldehyde October 4 2008, 02:41:38 UTC

omg
omgomgomgogm
this is..

SO different from your usual work.

it's just as brilliant but aaaah! definitely hit the mark on "dark" and "angst"! i'm glad you're trying things that might be out of your comfort zone, and you're doing a terrific job so far.

i feel so bad for all the characters in this story. and the ending? i definitely DID NOT SEE that coming! damn..

i'm going to have to re-read this a few times to let it settle. obviously you can tell how all over the place i am right now hehe. gah.

betelin_notecor October 4 2008, 03:11:09 UTC

I love, love, love writing dark!fic, but I don't because it wipes me out. Like literally, I'm so tired and my emotions are like blank. I really get into my characters emotions when I write or read, to the point that my heart clenchs at love confessions and I cry at sad parts, so all the emotions and craziness that goes into dark!fic just kills me. XD ( ... )

snegurochka_lee October 4 2008, 02:50:20 UTC

Here from hp_tng, and oh, oh, this is wonderful. Even with the mindfuck warnings and all the pieces falling in place, I still gasped out loud at the ending. Brilliant work! So, so creepy but utterly captivating. James is absolutely brilliant. :)

betelin_notecor October 4 2008, 03:16:26 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it! I really wasn't sure if it would go over well, because I've only written one "mindfuck" story before, and this is completely different from my normal style. XD

And I actually didn't know the ending myself until I wrote it. lol, I was surprised, but very pleased, when that popped out of my head!

ravenna_c_tan October 4 2008, 04:15:58 UTC

Oh, that's beautiful. Beautifully twisted and perfectly dark. Lovely.

betelin_notecor October 4 2008, 04:34:49 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. I've no idea where it came from... but I do adore it. XD

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betelin_notecor October 4 2008, 14:22:16 UTC

I know it's a good story if I made people like things they don't like! XDDD

Thank you so much! I do love that extra twist to the twist. It was such fun to write. :)

tiger_flame October 4 2008, 05:20:07 UTC

*gasps and flails and waves hands around*

OH.
MY.
GOD.

That- that- *is not coherent*

*gasps*

AH!!

That- that- soooooo good. So...messed up... so urg.

Again?

betelin_notecor October 4 2008, 14:25:14 UTC

I KNOW! This fic took me through the wringer writing it, and I'm glad it took you through the wringer reading it. :)

Again?

lol, not right now for sure... I have to get over the craziness of this fic before I can write another creepy mindfuck one. XDD

tiger_flame October 4 2008, 16:33:33 UTC

As long as you write another one, okay?

*grins* like...Oh from Marauder era... or..just another one!

betelin_notecor October 4 2008, 18:52:45 UTC

AGH. I don't write Marauder's era, unfortunately... I dunno why but that era almost squicks me. XDD (I'm insane, I know. XDD)