Wow, this was an amazing au fanfic. I'm usually wary of AU, but yours was brilliant, because you put so much detail into it. Bloody amazing how you came up with the Indian thing or the little things like how Snape would react to fellatio during that period! You're story has rendered me quite speechless indeed. The only thing - and I don't mean this as a criticism either - I found a bit odd was that you left the werewolf thing. Since the whole story was devoid of magic and you changed the whole Voldemort plotline into a realistic one, I was expecting a different explanation to Remus' disappearances during full moon. Apart from that I loved the whole story, amazing job!!!
The werewolf was left in as a request from the person who I wrote the story for. I personally would have taken out the whole sub-plot of Remus's disappearances and merely focused on Severus and Remus's romance and evil!Rede if I could have. =P
I'm glad you enjoyed it though! It really was a ton of fun to write. =D
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The only thing - and I don't mean this as a criticism either - I found a bit odd was that you left the werewolf thing. Since the whole story was devoid of magic and you changed the whole Voldemort plotline into a realistic one, I was expecting a different explanation to Remus' disappearances during full moon.
Apart from that I loved the whole story, amazing job!!!
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I'm glad you enjoyed it though! It really was a ton of fun to write. =D
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