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Bait Bus - First Seduction

Oct 31, 2010 21:10

Title: Bait Bus - First Seduction
Pairing: YunJae
Rating: NC-17
Length: Twoshot

Summary: Where unsuspecting men are lured into a van by a beautiful girl, only to be offered an interesting opportunity with an even more beautiful boy…

Disclaimery A/N: This is based off the porn site "Bait Bus". I admit, I stole their idea and used it for my own ( Read more... )

type: au, starring: dbsk, title: bait bus, rating: nc-17, status: complete, pairing: yunjae, genre: smut, length: twoshot, *fic

Comments 161

ladyelhisa October 31 2010, 12:21:53 UTC

Wow this is great but a little bit weird. XD
XD The plot is quite funny but sweet nevertheless.
Thanks~

bexy31 October 31 2010, 12:24:51 UTC

Oh my God you read fast @.@
I'm glad you liked it, even if it is a little weird ^_^"
Thank you for commenting ^w^

hennu15 October 31 2010, 12:27:25 UTC

Omooo awesome *_* lmao poor Yunho and Jae too? Idk xD Anyways the smut was hot~~ srsly and I like the fic idea, lol. Oh man I would've srsly freaked out esp grinning Changmin with a camera xD

Anyways love this!! xD

bexy31 October 31 2010, 12:31:18 UTC

Ah, I'm glad you liked it! ^w^

You know Changmin would love to film something like that XP But yeah, it'd be kinda weird... O.O

Thanks for commenting! :D

harangkaori October 31 2010, 12:40:27 UTC

spot~

gosh long part one..

haha ^^ i love this part

i really cant wait for more.. so the next part is yoosu?
no more yunjae?? aww well i cant wait to read more!!

bexy31 October 31 2010, 12:45:11 UTC

I'm glad you like it! :D

But yeah, no more Yunjae sorry T____T Just assume that they lived happily ever after~ :3

I shall try to get the next part up soooon! ^w^

Thanks for commenting~ :D

rethzneworld October 31 2010, 12:41:28 UTC

Gosh Yunho is adorable~ kekeke hope they are going strong after this~ XD

bexy31 October 31 2010, 12:45:55 UTC

Of course they are! XD They're Yunjae~ :3 ♥

Thanks for commenting ^w^

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bexy31 October 31 2010, 13:08:10 UTC

I know, I felt sorry for them too :( It's kinda mean >.<
But happy endings abound here! ^_^ And Yunho saves Jaejoong from the Bait Bus and is the only one to see him naked forever more :3
Which means Lord VoldaMin has to get a new boy, which is where the Yoosu part come in ;) I'm glad you're looking forwards to it! ^_^ I shall try not to disappoint~

Thanks for commenting! :D

yunho1205 October 31 2010, 17:22:13 UTC

HAHAHAHAHAHA!! VoldaMin???? HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!! Too funny!!! It took me a while, but I finally got it!! LOL! LOL! LOl! That was hilarious! <333